A Week in the Writing Life, 16 September 2023

I’m on the road this weekend, but let’s talk.

Home Front Stuff

It’s starting to get closer to classic Iowa early fall weather, which means you have to wear your coats to school in the morning and leave school with them tied around your waists in the afternoon. Eventually I might be able to turn off the air conditioners, but not yet.

Our family is headed back to Muscatine this weekend to attend the celebration of life for my brother in law, Rick, who passed recently. I hope everything goes as well as can be expected, especially for my sister in law and her kids. My wife Laura is quite close with her sisters and I appreciated my kids having a chance that I didn’t have, growing up near an extended family.

What I’ve Been Writing

I’ve finally gotten past the infamous sequence in The Yank Striker 2 I’ve talked about for the past few weeks where my main character makes his debut for his team. I’m also going to have to write the after party, which I think is going to be a proper night out when it’s all written down. All I have to say is the revising process will be at best an interesting process and at worst a brutal one. I’ll probably end up cutting the pre-match activities I portrayed in the rough draft by as much as two-third. Now, however, is not the time to reduce my word count, heh heh.

Many authors look at their rough drafts and want to write as much as possible. In my experiences with fan fiction, for example, there’s a tendency to write for as many words as possible, especially since there’s no cost to making your stories bigger than others online. However, I often found, even in fan fiction situations, it is a benefit to make your chapters shorter so the story doesn’t drag on forever. Breaking your story up into bite-sized pieces can help keep interest in your story. It also gives you an advantage of having a whole series of books, potentially, rather than just one big book.

(This Next Bit Could be Considered My Writing Advice for the Week)

Although this is a book based in the world of sports (specifically, the world of association football/soccer/football), one of the good questions about sports fiction is how much sport you should actually show in the story. If you base your story inside the world of sport, with athletes as main characters, it stands to reason some of this story needs to take place during either games or training for games.

However, as my friends from my writing group in Des Moines, the Iowa Writers’ Corner, put it, we read stories for the people and who they are, and not what they do. The majority of athlete’s lives are not spent either at the stadium or on the training ground, so it’s important to see them in other environments as well. One of the things I concentrated on during the revisions for The Yank Striker was trying to make the main character, DJ Ryan, into someone who was something more than just another athlete. I’d like to think I managed that from the feedback I’ve received so far, and I’d like to continue this throughout the series. So, finding a blend between all sport action (people can just watch television if they really want to see games) and no action is a delicate mix.

[HERE THERE BE SPOILERS FOR THE YANK STRIKER, SO WATCH OUT IF YOU HATE THOSE THINGS (I DON’T)]

I counted up the sports action in The Yank Striker. There’s about five different scenes of football (the gridiron/handegg kind), including both games and practices. There’s also about five scenes of games and practices involving soccer/football, as well. Most of them aren’t lengthy scenes, so that’s an advantage. So, ten scenes in all.

For the sequel (The Yank Striker 2), I’m thinking the number of these scenes needs to decrease slightly. For one thing, (BIT OF A SPOILER HERE) with one exception, all of the sports scenes will involve soccer. Another factor is the difference in time covered in both books. The Yank Striker’s story ran over the course of more than a year. Its sequel will cover somewhere between six and nine months, so I will have less room to leisurely cover soccer action in Part Two.

After all, I can always add scenes in the revisions if I really want to.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to Do With Writing

Does anyone else on this platform feel pressure to post on Substack Notes all the time? I mean, it is useful to get the word out, even if it might not have the same reach as Twitter in the old days or even Threads1 nowadays. However, I don’t think I need to be on there every day. It’s not like I have profound thoughts to write about at all hours.

I might get used to it someday. Sometimes I just need to kick back and get on a Substack Notes binge. But I need the writing time, especially on days when it takes me a while to get a hard 500 words written before heading off to bed.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

I’ll get back on this more eventually, but I saw this interesting three-part series starting on the On Substack page about how to create a consistent writing habit. I believe I’ve done a far better job with this than I did as a younger man, but I’m curious to hear what advice they have.

Where I’ll Be and Where You Can Find my Books

Here’s my upcoming appearances:

  • From 12-6 p.m. Sunday, Oct 1, I’ll be at the Windsor Heights Book Fair, 1141 69th St., Windsor Heights, and it is their second annual event. I’ll be joining 20 other local authors appearing there. I also need to mention this is also going to be a fund-raiser as well, as there will be a free-will donation to one of the local food banks in the area. I talked about this on Wednesday, and I’d love to see people there.
  • From 10 a.m. to 4 p.m. Saturday, Oct. 14, at MERGE, 136 Dubuque St., Iowa City, as part of the Iowa City Book Festival that week.I really should mention this fair is going to be part of a week-long festival throughout Iowa City from Oct. 8-15. Among the authors and artists hosting events throughout the week are John Irving, Jonathan Lethem, and Werner Herzog. I’m a bit chuffed I won’t be able to make it to many of the events because A, it’s a school week for the most part, and B, I’m far to far away in south central Iowa just to bop on up to Iowa City. I’d urge anyone who might be able to make it to Iowa City that week to click on the link in this paragraph and check out all of the different activities throughout the week.
    I will be there at the book fair, and I do look forward to seeing all of you who are able to make it.
  • And from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, Nov. 4, I will be at the Elwell Building at the Iowa State Fairgrounds as part of the 8th Annual Indie Author Book Expo. Shockingly, this will be the first time I’ve spent any significant time at the Iowa State Fairgrounds. After more than 40 years of living in Iowa, I’ve only really driven past them a few times. I’m not sure if that makes me a bad Iowan or a contrary one.
  • More events will be here if they come up, although they’ll likely slow down during the winter months.

    I’ve got links to my books in paperback and ebook format in the sidebar here, but you can get them in person at these fine Iowa bookstores:
  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.
  • I highly recommend all three places.

Writing Quote(s) of the Week

This week, how about we go with a couple of inspirational writing quotes, in a general sense. You may be familiar with them, or you may not. Here they are, anyway.

My aim is to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way.

Ernest Hemmingway

And…

Write with the door closed, rewrite with the door open.

Stephen King, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft

Final Thoughts

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  1. By the way, every time I think of the word Threads, I think of the 1984 film shown on BBC television about the effects of nuclear war on Britain in a World War III situation. If you’re the person who thinks Cormac McCarthy is a bit too cheery, this is probably the movie for you. Personally, I think they should screen this for any world leader who has access to nukes. ↩︎

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A Week in the Writing Life, 9 September 2023: My first event of the fall this weekend while I continue work on upcoming projects

[PHOTO NOTE: Cedar Rapids, Iowa, 1999. Photo courtesy of FEMA.]

Had to get this newsletter finished early this week since I’m going to be occupied on Friday and on the road for most of Saturday going back and forth from Cedar Rapids. You might have heard about it, although if this is the first time, you’ll probably be too late to get there. I highly doubt the place will be as flooded as you see here, given the recent weather.

Anyway, let’s talk writing and a few other things.

Home Front Stuff

Not much going on at home at the moment. My wife had a bumper crop of vegetables this year, especially squash, which I think received some help from the considerable sunlight and heat we got this summer. Hope the lack of water and the abundance of heat didn’t damage the big crops around here. At least we in Lucas County, Iowa, got a brief splash of rain on Tuesday which was more than overdue, and the temperatures are down at least ten degrees under what they were last weekend, which I’m grateful for.

I seem to write a little better when it gets cooler. It’s always a bit more comfortable to write when you’re huddled up in sweatshirts and a warm drink rather than sweating to death. Maybe that’s just all a result of my Scandinavian and Wisconsinite heritage rather than anything else. My current home of Chariton is just above the 41° North Latitude, and I have no desire to live anywhere south of 40°1.

What I’ve Been Writing

The longer I do this, I continue to learn more about the writing process. I have the sneaking suspicion the moment that I start to really know something a lot about the craft is the time I start reaching the end of my life. Well, I’ll worry about it later.

I’m starting to not only adjust to writing at a faster pace, but now I’m starting to consider exactly what I write on what days. I’ve recently run into difficulties during the past few weeks with promising to get newsletters done by midday Saturday and ending up getting them out Sunday night.

It occurred to me I have to prioritize what I have to write according to their deadlines. For example, yes I would like to get some writing done on my rough draft for The Yank Striker 2, but that is not as time sensitive as my writing for, say, the newsletter. This is especially the case if I want it to run at noon on Saturday and I want to make sure it is actually on time for once. It’s especially the case if I know I’ll be busy on Friday evening and I’ll be on the road for the vast majority of Saturday, and that I’ll only up for a quick write up by the end of the day. So, I get a good portion of the newsletter done earlier and serve it up on the scheduler for Saturday.

One of the disadvantages of this technique might be that you find yourself staring at a piece you know you want to write but there is something holding you back. Maybe you’re blocked, or maybe you’d rather write the “fun” stuff rather than the “work” stuff. I had a long discussion about the concept several months back, if you’d be interested in taking a look.

However, there should be a way around it. For example, there is something I wanted to include in the newsletter, but I realized it might do better as a standalone piece. If you have a new topic to work on that is timely, it can have the same sort of effect as just a fun writing piece.

We’ll have to see whether this works, but I think I’m going to give it a shot this week. The proof of whether it works will be whether this shows up on time at midday on Saturday. The other piece I’ll produce will be available for everyone, but I’ll work to put together a paid subscriber exclusive for next week.

Also, let’s consider this section doing double duty this week as your writing advice for the week. Welcome to my TED talk.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

I’ve finally been getting online to check out all of these writers and trying to give them shout-outs, because there’s so much good writing. Don’t consider this a case of sucking up, but Hanne Winarsky, the head of writer A&D at Substack, put together this interesting analysis of podcasts having a different feel on this platform rather than on others.

I have to say I’m slightly intimidated by trying to start a podcast on Substack itself. I’ve been experimenting a bit on Anchor but it can take a lot of effort to put together a professional sounding podcast episode. I also find it a bit awkward Substack doesn’t have audio-editing capabilities on its platform like Spotify does. I’ll have to consider it, but I’m more busy writing online than talking online.

Where I’ll Be and Where You Can Find my Books

Here’s my upcoming appearances:

  • From 12-6 p.m. Oct 1, I’ll be at the Windsor Heights Book Fair, 1141 69th St., Windsor Heights.
  • From 10 a.m. to 4 p.m. Saturday, Oct. 14, at MERGE, 136 Dubuque St., Iowa City, as part of the Iowa City Book Festival that week.
  • And from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, Nov. 4, I will be at the Elwell Building at the Iowa State Fairgrounds as part of the 8th Annual Indie Author Book Expo.

The Holy Fool and The Yank Striker are available in paperback and ebook formats. The links for those books are on the sidebar here and in my author’s profile.

They’re also available at these Iowa bookstores:

  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

I highly recommend all three places.

Writing Quote of the Week

I’m not sure my readers need to know too much about me. 🙂

A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.

G.K. Chesterton, Heretics

Final Thoughts

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Footnotes:

  1. 40° South Latitude might be a different deal. I’d be all right retiring in Argentina or New Zealand. ↩︎

A Week in the Writing Life, 3 September 2023: Summer’s wrapping up, but unfortunately the summer weather is not

[PHOTO NOTE: What I got when I searched Pexels for “Labor Day”.]

Let’s talk about writing and a few other odds and ends.

Home Front Stuff

Well, it was pretty decent weather we had this week, comparatively, but it’s going to get into the nineties today and won’t cool down until next weekend, at least. And I think we’re not going to be getting any rain for the foreseeable future. You wonder about how all this wild weather is going to eventually have an effect on the crops in Iowa.

Labor Day weekend in Iowa has seen my wife and I watching the Iowa Hawkeyes starting their season at home, but we were happy to watch it on the television. We don’t want to sweat to death when the weather will be in the nineties, and those benches at Kinnick Stadium are actually pretty narrow.

Getting on with the writing portion of our program, however, I decided to tackle something I haven’t really touched on as of yet.

What I’ve Been Writing

Not to talk numbers here, but I think I’ve seen something of an improvement over this past week. I usually try to meet a quota of 500 words per day of fiction or nonfiction written totally out of the context of my working life1.

I feel confident I have been at least a little more active on The Yank Striker 2, especially beginning to fill out a scene that happens to be [SLIGHT SPOILER TO The Yank Striker] young DJ Ryan’s debut match with Donford FC. Once I actually properly revise that scene, I think it’s going to be a funny highlight of the book, once I actually give it a good revising.

I’m hopeful I can put together a rough draft of The Yank Striker 2 by the end of this year or the early part of next year. With some sufficient revising and editing, and keeping ambitious for deadlines, I would love for a release date on this project sometime just before June 2024.

This would be the most ambitious completion timeline for any of my novels to date. I was probably writing out the first notes for The Holy Fool back in 2010, but it did not head out for publication until 2019. And I was seriously thinking about how I would put together a fiction book based in the worlds of American college football and English soccer a good decade before The Yank Striker was published this year. So, completing a book in a signle year is a bit ambitious. However, I do know my productivity as a writer has increased considerably since the days when I first started writing those books. In addition, since this is the second book in a series, much of the leg work for the book already has been completed.

I also think I need to review my outline notes to the book. I want to make sure I just add the essential scenes to the story and leave out pretty much everything else. I get the feeling if I do this, I might wind up with a shorter book than what I anticipated. However, that’s not the worst thing. I have the feeling a book set during the course of a soccer season might get repetitive if I showed everything I could show.

Photo by Mario Cuadros on Pexels.com

Also, I’ve been reading The Barcelona Complex, a 2021 book by Simon Kuper. It’s a study of the history and culture of FC Barcelona, the former club of Lionel Messi and many others. I’m glad I’ve had the chance to read it as part of the continuing research I’m doingh for the The Yank Striker series. You will see a full book review of the book tomorrow here on Substack and on Liegois Media.

Where I’ll Be and Where You Can Find my Books

Here’s my upcoming appearances:

  • From 9 a.m. to 2 p.m. Saturday, Sept. 9, I’ll be at the Groundswell Cafe, 201 3rd Ave. SW, Cedar Rapids, for an Indie Author Book Expo.
  • From 12-6 p.m. Oct 1, I’ll be at the Windsor Heights Book Fair, 1141 69th St., Windsor Heights. It’ll be my first time at this event, so I’m looking forward to it.
  • From 10 a.m. to 4 p.m. Saturday, Oct. 14, at MERGE, 136 Dubuque St., Iowa City, I’ll be participating in the book fair as part of the Iowa City Book Festival that week.
  • And from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, Nov. 4, I will be at the Elwell Building at the Iowa State Fairgrounds as part of the 8th Annual Indie Author Book Expo.


The Holy Fool and The Yank Striker are available in paperback and ebook formats. The links for those books are on the sidebar here and in my author’s profile.

If you want to go into a bookstore in Iowa and pick up one of my novels, you can go to:

  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

All of the above are fantastic locations for an afternoon of book hunting.

Writing Advice for the Week

For this week, maybe just check out the section on What I’m Writing, especially the bit about how I’m concentrating on just a few essential scenes in the story for the rough draft. This prevents you from having a bloated rough draft, helps propel your story forward, and if you need to add some additional scenes, you can always include these during the revising process. I’m going to be honest, though, a lot of those scenes really aren’t necessary.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

I might make some further recommendations during Labor Day on Substack Notes if I can think of it heh heh.

For now, check out this article from Jackie Dana, one of the first people I ran into when I got onto Substack, where she has a good suggestion for fighting writing burnout2.

Writing Quote of the Week

This rings true for me.

Which of us has not felt that the character we are reading in the printed page is more real than the person standing beside us?

Cornelia Funke

Final Thoughts

Sorry I was late again. I’m going to start writing the next edition, like, tomorrow, on top of everything else.

I have a shout-out to Georgia from Substack tech support who helped me figure out exactly why my photos weren’t showing up on social media posts. It was a weird problem I had for about a month until the support people finally clued me in to what was happening, so thanks to her.

Hope you have a great Labor Day weekend. I always love hearing from people in the comments or by email, so say hi or let me know what made you push the subscribe button or what might tempt you to do so.

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Footnotes:

  1. For example, I don’t count lesson plans or special education documents in my daily writing count. ↩︎
  2. Feel free to consider this some additional writing advice, as well. ↩︎

A Week in the Writing Life, 27 August 2023: I’m in a slight productivity slump, but I’m still working

[PHOTO NOTE: This is not my actual classroom.]

Don’t know about you, but it’s felt like August just flew by, even though the weather is not even close to being fall-like.

I’ll warn you, today’s going to be a short one with my schedule this week1.

Home Front Stuff

I’ve now begun the school year in my district with more students than I’ve ever had on a special education roster. However, I’m pretty optimistic about this year and how it will go. I have to say the first three days with students went well.

My son Jacob in Des Moines is continuing with his studies toward his journeyman card for heating and air-conditioning (HVAC) when not working, and my daughter Madeline is now settled into her new apartment in Iowa City and starting her senior year of chemical engineering studies at the University of Iowa.

As busy as I have been with school, however, fall can’t come soon enough. I’m glad the Premier League and the other European soccer leagues have started and the day I see the back of 100 degree-plus and even 80 degree plus days in Iowa can’t come soon enough.

What I’ve Been Writing

As far as the amount of words I’ve been writing this week, I don’t think it’s been much more than last week, and I’m officially in a slight slump. However, I’ve finally resumed work and actual writing on The Yank Striker Part 2 and powering through a key scene in the story. So, I feel good I’ve seen progress.

Photo by Mario Cuadros on Pexels.com

Over the weekend, I picked up a copy of The Barcelona Complex, a 2021 book by Simon Kuper. He was one of the authors of Soccernomics, the soccer equivalent of Moneyball and a very useful breakdown regarding the world of soccer. The Barcelona Complex is a study of the history and culture of FC Barcelona, fomer club of Lionel Messi and many other soccer superstars. I’m considering it to be a continuing part of the research I’ve done into the sport for the past decade with the eventual intention of starting The Yank Striker series.

In my continuing efforts to put some interesting content on this site, I’ve decided to do a book review of The Barcelona Complex right here next weekend. And it will be a free story, as well2. Hope you enjoy it.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

This section of the newsletter might come and go, given my ever-changing schedule. With that in mind, I’ve decided to move my little book promo stuff into its own section below.

I am going to take a look at some of my older items here that I imported from my Liegois Media site and see if some of it might be worth a repost, even in revised form. I’m not too worried about you seeing it again because frankly most of you on Substack probably haven’t seen it yet.

Where I’ll Be and Where You Can Find my Books

The Fall 2023 book tour continues:

  • From 9 a.m. to 2 p.m. Saturday, Sept. 9, I’ll be at the Groundswell Cafe, 201 3rd Ave. SW, Cedar Rapids, for an Indie Author Book Expo.
  • From 12-6 p.m. Oct 1, I’ll be at the Windsor Heights Book Fair, 1141 69th St., Windsor Heights. It’ll be my first time at this event, so I’m looking forward to it.
  • From 10 a.m. to 4 p.m. Saturday, Oct. 14, at MERGE, 136 Dubuque St., Iowa City, I’ll be participating in the book fair as part of the Iowa City Book Festival that week.
  • And from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, Nov. 4, I will be at the Elwell Building at the Iowa State Fairgrounds as part of the 8th Annual Indie Author Book Expo.

Unfortunately, due to a change in my schedule, I won’t be able to attend the Badger Book Fair book fair at the town’s library in Badger, Iowa, from 8 a.m. to 1 p.m. September 16. I would urge anyone available that day to go on out there and meet some of the authors. Several of my writing friends from Iowa, including Darrel Day, Maggie Rivers, and Dennis Maulsby, will be there with their books. It was a great experience participating in the fair earlier this year, and I hope to be back there sometime soon.


Both of my books, The Holy Fool and The Yank Striker, are available in paperback and ebook formats. Check out the links for those books on the sidebar here and in my author’s profile. Any purchases (and reviews) are absolutely appreciated.

If you want to go into a bookstore in Iowa and pick up one of my novels, you can go to:

  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

All of the above are fantastic locations for an afternoon of book hunting.

Writing Advice for the Week

This week I decided to hold off on commenting on other writing advice to discuss something I’ve had to deal with a bit recently. In short, that advice is:

Don’t worry about the rough draft being any good.

This is coming from someone who even has a tendency to want to edit and proofread what I write on online forums. It’s good as a writer to be concerned about the quality of what you produce.

However, that drive for perfection can (and has for me) paralyze a writer. I’ve been in situations where I’m so worried about whether something I’ve written is good or makes sense it freezes me in place.

There are places for perfection and excellence. Rough drafts are not one of them. The purpose of rough drafts are to throw your ideas and words onto printed or electronic pages as fast as possible. All of this striving for excellence needs to be saved for revisions and editing. As Sylvester Stallone has said3, the revisions are the fun part. Just throw those ideas and words on the page, and quit worrying about whether or not they’re in the right order or if they make sense. I don’t care if you have to write a series of paragraphs repeating the sentence “I’ll figure out exactly what’s going on in this part of the story at a given moment4.” Just get it done.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

I’ll likely have to post more suggestions on Notes later because I haven’t had time for it this weekend.

For now, I’d like to recognize one of the members of the Iowa Writers’ Collaborative, Mary Swander , who is celebrating her anniversary on Substack. She’s got a cool Substack where she writes about what life in rural Iowa is like.

Writing Quote of the Week

This is a good illustration of the saying “show, don’t tell.”

You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying in the road.

Richard Price

Final Thoughts

Sorry this was a little later than I expected. I’m going to really try and get this thing out on Saturday once again later this week.

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Footnotes:

  1. And a bit later in the day than I expected either. (Insert shrugging emoji.) ↩︎
  2. It doesn’t make too much sense to fully monetize book reviews with all of them out there. ↩︎
  3. I consider Stallone to be an underrated screenwriter. ↩︎
  4. The last four words in this sentence were a favored saying of the Dutch soccer player and coach Johan Cruyff (1947-2016) back when he was coach of FC Barcelona in Spain. Cruyff would say the phrase in Spanish (en un momento dado) to stall when he wasn’t quite sure what to say in Spanish. ↩︎

A Week in the Writing Life, 21 August 2023: Finally, maybe, making some progress on some new stuff… and not.

Hi, everyone. Let’s talk writing.

Home Front Stuff

I’m in the middle of in-service days for school, which means I am once again attempting to find time to write. Obviously, I don’t have as much time to write when I’m in school for several hours every day. Then again, there have been more than a few times I’ve seriously considered whether I write better on tight deadlines or with a small amount of time to work.

It’ll be interesting to see if I’m more productive during the next few weeks or not heheh, I got way too lackadaisical.

And on that note…

What I’ve Been Writing

Again, not much.

I have to keep this in perspective, however. In my younger years – that is, from my college years to about a decade and a half ago – I might go years without having written anything of value. Or, if I did, there wasn’t much size to the writing. It wasn’t until about the end of this period, when I first started developing what became The Holy Fool: A Journalist’s Revolt, did I start to try and mold myself into an actual writer rather than just simply claim to be a writer.

Since I’ve begun this learning process, and especially since I started blogging regularly on WordPress (Liegois Media) starting in 2017 and keeping consistent records of my writing productivity, I’ve not gone for more than a few days in a row without writing. In fact, 2022 was my most productive year ever writing from a word-count perspective, and this year might at least match or equal it, my current dry streak notwithstanding.

I think the point is, I’m very glad I take being a productive writer seriously. I’m glad I’m constantly attempting to better myself, and I devote more time to the craft than I do almost any other hobby I have (although my wife Laura might say watching soccer is right up there as far as the time I spend doing it).

However, I think there are times where you have to take a bit of a brain break, especially if you have something going on like getting ready for a brand new school year and hoping it goes well. Just don’t let it go on for a couple of years, trust me1.

One bit of good news is I managed to get more of a scene written on The Yank Striker 2. Now, if I actually finish that scene in the next week, I’ll be feeling really accomplished.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

As the summer is ending, I’m setting aside a few weekends for appearances at local book fairs and other events, and I’m hoping the weather is much cooler than it is out today. So far, here’s the events I’ve got planned2.

  • From 9 a.m. to 2 p.m. Saturday, Sept. 9, I’ll be at the Groundswell Cafe, 201 3rd Ave. SW, Cedar Rapids, for an Indie Author Book Expo.
  • (JUST ADDED) From 12-6 p.m. Oct 1, I’ll be at the Windsor Heights Book Fair, 1141 69th St., Windsor Heights. It’ll be my first time at this event, so I’m looking forward to it.
  • From 10 a.m. to 4 p.m. Saturday, Oct. 14, at MERGE, 136 Dubuque St., Iowa City, I’ll be participating in the book fair as part of the Iowa City Book Festival that week.
  • And from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, Nov. 4, I will be at the Elwell Building at the Iowa State Fairgrounds as part of the 8th Annual Indie Author Book Expo.

By the way, both of my books, The Holy Fool and The Yank Striker, are now available in paperback and ebook formats. Check out the links for those books on the sidebar here and in my author’s profile. Any purchases (and reviews) are absolutely appreciated.

If you actually want to go into a bookstore in Iowa and pick up one of my novels, there’s a few places to do so in Iowa. They include:

  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

All of the above are fantastic locations for an afternoon of book hunting.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

If you got a text or email from me last week, I didn’t mean to clutter up your inboxes or DMs. I just found out there was a new way of spreading the word about my Substack, so I decided to take advantage of it.

Writing Quote of the Week

I talked a little bit about using commonly understood words, and here’s Uncle Steve with an interesting measurement regarding when a word is too obscure to use. (I say one exception to this idea is if the word in question can help tell a story in a way no other one can.)

Any word you have to hunt for in a thesaurus is the wrong word. There are no exceptions to this rule.

Stephen King

Final Thoughts

That is all for now. I was going to have a bit more, but there’s one or two items I think I’m going to post separately tonight not to bog the newsletter down too much. Let’s see if I can surprise a couple people.

As always, a free subscription to my newsletter is helpful, but a paid subscription would be a big help, of course. If there’s something I could provide here in this writing newsletter to get you to hit the subscribe button, I’d love to know about it.

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Footnotes:

  1. Even though I held off on the writing advice section this week, I have to admit this section is sort of turning into writing advice lite in some ways. 🙂 ↩︎
  2. Looking at all of this below reminds me I need to get all these dates in my Google Calendar. ↩︎

A Week in the Writing Life, 12 August 2023: Went back to my hometown, saw the folks, and wrote.

Hi, everyone. With the beginning of the Iowa State Fair and high school and college football practices, everyone in Iowa is sensing the end of the summer season is upon us. And I’ll be back to the hustle of another 180 or so days in school with students. And despite all that, I’m still planning on making time for writing.

A Quick Request (EDIT: Haha)

I want to make sure what I am writing here has relevance to all of you who have taken the chance on subscribing to me. I want to believe I’m providing value to all my readers, whether you are a free or a paid subscriber.

I am absolutely open to new ideas and ways to expand and improve this newsletter. I think I’m trying to make it unique and something reflecting my personality. However, I’m also wanting it to be useful to you, something that you can get something out of it.

My vision is to provide something to those who are interested in the craft of writing and who might be interested in someone from Iowa who is practicing the art of fiction. I want to share my fiction with you, as well as any nonfiction writing related to this. I would like to promote this work here, whether it involves my novels or original short fiction here, although I don’t just want to turn this into a tiresome promotional vehicle, either.

With my Substack and its older sister website on WordPress, I have been working to try and come up with a unique site people could get something from. On my first full-blown post on my WordPress blog Liegois Media several years ago, I declared I wanted my blog to be centered on “writing, my work, and the writing craft.” I think I simplified it later to “writing and the writing life.” Specifically, my writing life, because I wanted to share that journey here and also hope to use what I’ve experienced and learned during my time as a writer. Frankly, however, I’ve also used this site as my own tool to help process what I’ve done as a writer, what I’ve struggled with, to try and see how I can overcome it. If I tried to teach any visitors to this site something about writing, I hope my primary student has been myself.

All that said, I want to keep moving forward and refining this newsletter, and trying to give readers a better idea of what I mean by writing and the writing life. In all honesty, I have been reading many different writers, especially on Substack, and have been blown away by what they have produced.

I think what I plan on doing over at least the next few newsletters I’ll be trying to continue reexamining what the specific voice and purpose of the blog is. However, I also want to get feedback from you. What are you getting out of this newsletter? As someone interested in writing, what would you like to see more of here you are not seeing? What am I doing pretty well?

I’m going to drop the first two polls I’ve posted on here to see if I get any feedback on it. Go ahead and respond to it, or leave a comment below, or email me at jasonliegois@liegois.media. I do want to hear from you soon, however. Otherwise, I’m going to start emailing subscribers individually and get their feedback1.

Home Front Stuff

I had a relaxing couple of days back in my hometown of Muscatine, Iowa. I always appreciate the chance to spend time with my parents, especially since the school year is coming up.

Mississippi River near Muscatine, Iowa, 11 August 2023.

One of the things I have missed most about living in Chariton, Iowa, is not living next to the Mississippi River. I have lived alongside this river for forty-two years of my life and I have to say it is part of who I am. Some of the most peaceful times of my life have been on summers where I’d accompany some family out on a boat to some of the sandbars or islands in the river channel like you see above and spend a whole afternoon watching and feeling the waters ramble downstream2.

Muscatine, Iowa, 10 August 2023.

When I was a kid back in Muscatine, I lived in an area of the town where they had a number of steep, wooded ravines and little creeks emptying out in the Mississippi basin. When we first arrived in town back in the late 1970’s, the area wasn’t totally built up, but over the years more plots of land ended up with houses on them. However, those same neighborhoods were dotted with these ravines that couldn’t be developed and built onto. I always treasured having these areas near my home, these little patches of wild space preserved for the living things.

I might be able to get a few poems out of the subject of ravines.

What I’ve Been Writing

I’ve been getting some writing done on the site and in some of this fan fiction, but I have not been getting enough done with The Yank Striker 2, in all fairness.

Have you ever had a situation where you’ve gone back to a scene multiple times over the course of several weeks or longer, then look back on it after a certain point and realize you’ve spent way too long on a certain scene? By this, I don’t mean you have spent too much time writing the scene, but the scene has gone on for far too long.

The scene I’m writing happens to be a debut soccer match, so I have to include the scene in there. However, I’ve realized I’ve spent far too much time on some of the buildup to the game itself. I now know I’ll have to significantly cut and revise this scene when the time comes.

However, I can’t let perfection stand in the way of production. My plan now is to write an account of the game itself, as well as an after-party scene I have in mind. After this, I want to start putting together some other ideas of scenes I absolutely think are necessary to have in the story. Once I add in these scenes (leaving out the very last scene3), I might go back to that scene and start cutting.

I’m trying to be hopeful I will have made more progress on the rough draft by the time I post again next week. We’ll see.

Also, I promise I’ll also post at least another paid subscriber exclusive here next weekend as well. It’ll be either a sneak peek at some of the fiction I’m working on or some of my poetry.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

This will be a bit short.

No get-togethers or in-person appearances planned for this month, although if that changes, you’ll hear about it here first.

I’ll post an updated list of appearances for the fall here next week.

I need to get back on here and update my site and do a few more recommended pages, etc. I also need to get to some more work as club secretary for the Iowa Writers Corner. It turns out writing is not the only thing I procrastinate about.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

I’ve decided I’m going to set aside Sunday afternoons as the date I scan my Substack and WordPress feeds for examples of good writing I find out there. Especially considering I’ll be back at work by next week, it’s probably the most opportune time for me to take a few minutes out of my life to do this.

For today, however, I wanted to acknowledge

Joseph L. Murphy as a fellow Substack writer. During my years as a news reporter, I had the distinct pleasure of working with more than a few great photographers, but Joe was definitely among the top ones I ever saw in action. Since those years, he’s gone on to work in the communications world wearing various hats, but he’s still producing great images. This is a recent post of his about the Iowa State Fair, and his photography really does bring this event to life4.

Writing Advice for This Week

Once again, I’m taking a look at pieces of writing advice I find in various places on the Internet and discuss how much, if at all, I agree with them. If you remember from some of the previous weeks’ posts, I’m more of a fan of writing guidelines rather than writing rules. I’m going to briefly illustrate my point about these rules, and why guidelines seem to be a more sensible thing to believe in.

To be fair, there are some writing rules given in various articles and textbooks that seem to be ironclad; that is, they should be followed under all circumstances. For example, I ran across an article from 2020, “Writing Rules: How to Improve Your Writing,” on the website selfpublishing.com, written by author (and school librarian) Brenda Dehaan.

This article gives 13 different pieces of advice on the art of writing. Do not worry, I don’t plan to go over all 13 of them here, but I do want to review a few of those items. Some I would characterize as writing “rules,” while there’s a couple others I would classify as writing guidelines.

The first three rules mentioned in the list are: watch out for using words commonly confused with other similar sounding ones, keep the subjects and verbs of your sentences in agreement with each other, and don’t use “wishy-washy” words, or words that water down or clutter up your writing. Under almost all circumstances, I would say those are excellent guidelines to follow.

However, especially in the world of fiction, there are instances when we have to violate these rules. For example, people don’t always speak in grammatically correct ways. They often don’t write in grammatically correct ways. And there are many instances where we as authors wish to show this language to help learn about the characters using it and how they think.

There are even rarer instances, of course, where authors break the rules of grammar for artistic effect, or to communicate unique writing voices or moods. The careers of the American poet and novelist e.e. cummings and the Irish novelist and poet James Joyce are just the most obvious examples of this.

Buffalo Bill’s
defunct
        who used to
        ride a watersmooth-silver
                                  stallion
and break onetwothreefourfive pigeonsjustlikethat
                                                  Jesus

he was a handsome man
                      and what i want to know is
how do you like your blueeyed boy
Mister Death

– e.e. cummings, “Buffalo Bill” (1920)

So, there are writing “rules” to be observed in almost all situations, but not every instance.

However, Dehaan also clearly frames some of these rules as more like guidelines. Two good examples of this are the ninth and tenth rules on the list: The use of sentence fragments and using a variety of sentence structures. In the first instance, she points out while educators concentrate on ensuring their students use complete sentences, there are several instances where using sentence fragments are not only allowed, but sometimes advisable. Authors just need to make sure they can identify fragments and explain why they are used in a given circumstance. In the second instance, the author agrees using a variety of sentence structures “invites interest and keeps people reading,” but not before qualifying that statement with another noting the authors of children’s bedtime stories use a repetitive sentence structure to help lull kids to sleep.

As always, read up on the guidelines, but know when you have to travel outside them for the sake of the writing.

Writing Quote of the Week

I never considered writing to be as much of an ordeal as George Orwell claims here, but I do agree very much with one part of it – writing and creating has become a compulsion for me.

“Writing a book is a horrible, exhausting struggle, like a long bout with some painful illness. One would never undertake such a thing if one were not driven on by some demon whom one can neither resist nor understand.”

George Orwell

Final Thoughts

As I mentioned up above5, if you have any questions, concerns, advice, let me know in the comments or email me. Any feedback you have would be valued, especially all of you fellow writers on Substack.

And that’s a wrap. As always, check the sidebar and author page links for my work, and I’d love you to leave a review of my books as well wherever you get them. Thanks.

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Footnotes:

  1. LOL. ↩︎
  2. I’m taking a moment here to rage slightly about either the inability of Substack to accept HEIC photos or the fact I have way too many photos on my phone, forcing said phone to convert files to a format that is a pain in the rear to modify. Oh, well. ↩︎
  3. As some readers might be aware of, I have in recent years begun to write rough drafts out of sequence and assembling them based on outlines I think up before I get started. This is intended to help reduce instances where I get hung up on some sections of the book because, for example, I might think I need to write the second section of a story before moving on to the first. However, I always make sure to write the final scene of my book as my last act of completing the rough draft. ↩︎
  4. I’ve yet to attend the Iowa State Fair in person. And yes, I acknowledge this makes me not quite a proper Iowan. ↩︎
  5. Pleaded for, actually. ↩︎

A Week in the Writing Life, 5 August 2023: Trying to write as the school year approaches for me and my daughter

[PHOTO NOTE: Finally getting rain.]

Hope everyone is doing well. From the photo, you can tell that we finally got some rain in Lucas County, Iowa, but we’ll need a bit more, I think. I’ll let you know how the week went, and we’ll likely get to some writing.

Home Front Stuff

We successfully moved our daughter Madeline out of her own apartment last weekend, so now we’ll take the stuff we moved out of there and put in storage and move it into the new place this weekend. The vagaries of leases in Iowa City meant we couldn’t complete this entire process in a single day, thus the storage locker. Both she and we are looking forward to getting the process completed, but one advantage is it gives us the opportunity for all of us to get together, which is rare since we all like in three separate cities. I’m looking forward to it.

School is again on my mind since my vacation can be measured in days rather than weeks, although no work was done this week and likely won’t be even started until next week. I’m not sure exactly what this will look like, since it will be the first time I’ll be doing all special education teaching through the year. We have many new teachers coming in after a number of departures, including our special education staff. One of the things I’ll need to remember to do is to make sure to welcome them and support them as I was when I first came to my district.

I stayed way too late up early Tuesday morning to watch the US Women’s National Team play the worst I’ve ever seen them in a match, 0-0 against Portugal. I’ve got a feeling the world is catching up to the American women, and I don’t think it’s guaranteed they win their third World Cup in a row (which no one, men or women, have done). Brazil, Germany, Italy, Canada, and Argentina also got knocked out, which is pretty wild.

What I’ve Been Writing

…a little more than last week.

I talked last week about my writing slumps, and some of the techniques I’ve used to break myself out of a slump. You can go back and look at those, but I actually ended up using a technique I didn’t mention here: try to write about something totally different, on a different project. I ended up doing some work on my fan fiction series and then wrote an entry for the story my writing group in Des Moines, the Iowa Writers’ Corner, is putting together this year. The latter was quite a challenge and I was happy with the result.

Of course, the main drawback of this particular technique is that it can delay you completing the work you set aside for the time being. However, sometimes it’s better to have a small delay on getting on with your project instead of just getting blocked on something for days, weeks, or months on end. Anyway, I’ll see how this works in the long term.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

This section I’m going to keep short this week – I mentioned last week a few places I’ll be making appearances this fall, but I’ll try not to do all promotion all the time, especially since some of these events won’t be for another month or two.

I’m continuing to hunt for some more opportunities to promote me and my work, as always, so I’m reaching out to radio and podcast people. If anyone is interested in having me appear, say the word and I’ll be there. Also, I just realized it might be good policy to keep up the promotional work, because if all goes well I’m going to have a second book in the series to sell next year.

As I get more events up on my calendar, I’ll let you know about them.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

I am way overdue for a Substack Notes series of recommendations for reading. I’m getting too distracted or just flaking out this deep into my summer vacation.

But for now, congratulations are in order for Fictionistas as they celebrate 2,000 subscribers. I love their work and I hope I manage to have that amount of success sometime soon.

Writing Advice for This Week

Last week, I decided to try and change around how I do this writing advice, taking a look at some commonly repeated bits of writing advice and see how valid they were in all situations.

I ran across this article on Grammerly, where the author, Brittney Ross, seems to have had the same idea as me. I won’t go over the entire article here, but she makes the point that writing rules should be seen more as guidelines rather than hard or fast rules. For example, it’s best not to rely on adverbs to describe a scene, but they can sometimes be the best way to describe it.

Another example she gives is the “rule” that a paragraph has to be at least three sentences1. Of course, not every paragraph is going to be this length. Look at fiction, for one thing. Tolkien needed a bit more than three paragraphs in a sentences to properly describe the scenery around his character. Also, how many dialogue paragraphs end after a single sentence, or even a fragment?

In short, I think I like the idea of writing guidelines rather than writing rules.

Writing Quote of the Week

Once again, my man King gets to the point and tells you one more thing you should know about writing.

Amateurs2 sit and wait for inspiration, the rest of us just get up and go to work.”

Stephen King, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft

Final Thoughts

If you have any questions, concerns, advice, let me know in the comments or email me. Any feedback you have would be valued, especially all of you fellow writers on Substack.

And that’s a wrap. As always, check the sidebar and author page links for my work, and I’d love you to leave a review of my books as well wherever you get them. Thanks.

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Footnotes:

  1. The question of “how many sentences does a paragraph have to be?” is the most frequent writing question among reluctant (and even not so reluctant) middle-school writers. ↩︎
  2. I hope I’m not putting words into King’s mouth here, but in this case he uses “amateur” to distinguish between people who just write for fun and those who take it seriously. ↩︎

A Week in the Writing Life, 29 July 2023: Dubious writing productivity

[PHOTO NOTE: Me out and about at Mainframe Studios in Des Moines this week, where I talked with John Busbee for his The Culture Buzz program at KFMG 98.9.]

Hello, and welcome. Way too hot of a week this week, but I’m hopeful we’ll get some relief in the next couple of days. Let’s talk a little writing.

Home Front Stuff

Pretty much the only interesting bit of news personally is the whole family is getting together tomorrow and the next weekend to help my daughter Madeline move to a new apartment in Iowa City. It will be her new base of operations for her senior year at the University of Iowa as she continues to study chemical engineering. Thankfully, it appears it will not be as hot as it was earlier this week.

Otherwise, it’s coming to the end of July, and now I’m starting to get a bit antsy as I tend to do once it rolls around to August 1. That’s the official time when I start wondering and thinking about the new school year and new classes.

This coming school year will be my third at this school district. It will be a bit different this year since during my first year, I was half special education and half general education (English) and my second year, I was all English, and now I will be all special education, which was my hope. I’m cautiously optimistic about the upcoming school year.

What I’ve Been Writing

…not much.

I am in the midst of a pretty long dry spot – maybe one of the longer ones I’ve had for a long time. I think I’m at this point because recently I was writing and planning something quite a bit exciting for me to some previously begun works that just seem more like work to me.

This is a mentality that I’ve gotten to recognize in my writing habits. However, I’ve found some ways to overcome them and get past them, which I really need to start putting into gear. For example, if I’m writing a scene that seems to have turned into a chore, or just seems like work, sometimes I delay writing the scene and move on to another scene. Other options include radically reordering or rearranging some of the events in the scene, drastically reducing the length of the scene, or simply cutting the scene altogether.

I find the last option often can be the best for eliminating unnecessary scenes and speeding along the story. If I’m finding it boring, I have a good feeling people will thumb right past it.

So, I am hoping one or more of these techniques starts getting me out of the slump I’ve been in this week. It won’t be happening this weekend, with me trying to get out this week’s newsletter and moving my daughter out of her old place. Hope springs eternal.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

I was busy this week with an appearance with

John Busbee on The Culture Buzz in Des Moines on Wednesday and an appearance at Beaverdale Books in Des Moines the same day, one of three Iowa independent bookstores where you can find The Yank Striker in stock. I’ve set up links to recordings of both events on a new section of the front page’s sidebar called Interviews. Go ahead and click on the links if you wanted to hear me in person.

I don’t have many things coming up recently, but there are a few events I’ll be at this coming fall when I’ll have to be more of the “weekend warrior” than I have been this summer. So far:

  • From 9 a.m. to 2 p.m. Saturday, Sept. 9, I’ll be at the Groundswell Cafe, 201 3rd Ave. SW, Cedar Rapids, for an Indie Author Book Expo.
  • From 10 a.m. to 4 p.m. Saturday, Oct. 14, at MERGE, 136 Dubuque St., Iowa City, I’ll be participating in the book fair as part of the Iowa City Book Festival that week.
  • And from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, Nov. 4, I will be at the Elwell Building at the Iowa State Fairgrounds as part of the 8th Annual Indie Author Book Expo.

I hope to see some of you either there or around, and I’ll put any other events up as I confirm them.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

This week, I learned two writers/journalists I’ve long admired have joined the Substack community.

Even though Dan Rather might still be somewhat beyond introduction several years into retirement from his run as a CBS news correspondent and anchorman, but I’ve appreciated his writing ever since rediscovering him on Facebook. On his new page Steady , he keeps writing up good stuff like this observation on events in the Donal Trump classified documents case.

Lucian K. Truscott IV is an author I’ve followed for a long time. I’ve long been a fan of his novels like Dress Grey and Army Blue, and in recent years I’ve appreciated his journalism in various publications such as The Village Voice. I was hyped to see him on Substack, with such articles as this one explaining the difference between the political world and the judicial world when it comes to the Trump situation.

I’ll really need to do another string of recommendations for Substack Notes when I get a free minute.

Writing Advice for This Week

As promised, some writing advice based on my reactions to the writing advice of others. I’ve decided to try this method for two reasons. First, it can be quite difficult generating new and novel writing advice on a regular basis. At least, this is the case for me. And second, except for a very few obvious examples (always capitalize the start of sentences, use proper punctuation), I am of the opinion there are always exceptions to many “tenets” of writing.

For starters, I’ll mention two this week, selected from the editorial staff of Custom-Writing.org’s “11 Basic Writing Rules – Common Mistakes & Fixes.”

The first rule it mentions is “Keep Your Sentences Short and Simple.” The reasoning for this rule is as follows:


To leave your readers satisfied and give them what they came for, you need to act fast. You don’t have time to ramble about random things, so your sentences should be short and straightforward.The golden rules are: You need to be able to fit up to 35 words in it. The main focus should be on verbs and nouns.

Right, let’s dive into this. To start with, I would hope when you are putting together sentences you are focused on verbs and nouns, because there’s no such thing as sentences without them.

But also, sticking to an arbitrary limit of 35 words is not always advisable. In a short journalism piece of only a few paragraphs, sticking to several short sentences might be the best policy. However, the longer a writer’s text becomes, the more those short sentences become monotonous to read and kills reader interest. In these circumstances, you should use a wide variety of sentence lengths. It is all right to use short sentences, long sentences, and sentences in between, just as long as you don’t use them all the time.

The third rule on its list is “Include Simple Words and Word Combinations.”

[…] what’s the point of having short sentences when they’re filled with words that a regular person would rarely use in everyday life?No one will ever want to look up the meaning of a certain word in the dictionary. […] Especially when quickly scanning through an article.It isn’t a grammar rule per se, but it can save you much trouble.

Again, keeping things simple by using these simple word combinations is not an inherently bad idea, but sometimes you have to wander outside that comfort zone for you and your reader for specific reasons. Maybe you want to insert some obscure words into a certain character’s dialogue to show they are a sophisticated, well-read person (or are desperate to make people believe this). Or, like in my short story “Into the Cave” I mentioned a bit ago above, maybe I want to not only use the somewhat obscure word “kayfabe” but also explain its definition because I wanted to give readers insight into the specific culture it relates to (professional wrestling).

As with this and the previous rule, you always need to take the writing situation under consideration before you make choices based on those rules.

Writing Quote of the Week

Decided to go a bit further back in time than normal this week with a quote from one of the greats about the purpose of storytelling.

I have claimed that Escape is one of the main functions of fairy-stories, and since I do not disapprove of them, it is plain that I do not accept the tone of scorn or pity with which ‘Escape’ is now so often used. Why should a man be scorned if, finding himself in prison, he tries to get out and go home? Or if he cannot do so, he thinks and talks about other topics than jailers and prison-walls?

J.R.R. Tolkien

Final Thoughts

Would you be interested in me doing some book reviews? I’m always interested in trying something new, although if I did, I’d probably post those as separate from the regular newsletter.

If you have any questions, concerns, advice, let me know in the comments or email me. Any feedback you have would be valued, especially all of you fellow writers on WordPress or Substack.

And that’s a wrap. As always, check the sidebar and author page links for my work, and I’d love you to leave a review of my books as well wherever you get them. Thanks.

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While I do appreciate you following this blog, I really would like you to subscribe to my Substack page. By subscribing to that page, you’ll not only be receiving my Substack newsletter, The Writing Life With Jason Liegois (the companion blog to this one), but you’ll also be signing up for my email list. Just click the button below.

A Week in the Writing Life, 22 July 2023: A big announcement regarding The Yank Striker

[PHOTO NOTE: My backyard which won’t be habitable next week because it will be too darn hot.]

Welcome, everybody. A lot has been happening this week and the week to come.

Home Front Stuff

Late last week, I learned of the death of my brother-in-law, Rick. I never had brothers or sisters growing up, but when I first started dating my future wife Laura, I immediately came into a family of four sisters, of whom my wife was the youngest. Rick was married to Laura’s sister Kelly.

It seems so strange thinking I knew him for such a short time, but when I check the calendar I realize we knew each other for more than 30 years. Time is starting to play tricks on me.

He was actually more of my father’s generation, serving in Vietnam before returning home to work as a millwright. I’m not going to get into a full obituary here, but he was a good guy who loved his wife and kids and was always generous with me and especially my own kids. He will be missed and cancer is a stupid disease.

What I’ve Been Writing

I’ve actually been busy with several items this past week. Earlier in the week, I was finishing up a short story called “Into the Cave,” which I plan to post tomorrow as a paid subscriber exclusive piece. I consider it to be a prologue, test story, whatever you want to call it, regarding this new idea I have for a fiction series. I’ve been thinking of the idea to start putting the story together online and later publishing all of it or some of it in book format later. The whole idea of trying to build a series and showing off the creative process on Substack in real time is something very intriguing to me. It’s an opportunity for you the reader, to see the creative process as not something sacred and mysterious, but something that takes work, thought, and can evolve greatly over time.

So, that will be forthcoming tomorrow. I just want to remind any readers who sign up for a paid subscription get an automatic 7-day free trial. Sunday would be a good day to give it a try.

As for other projects, I need to get back into the groove with The Yank Striker 2, still in the rough draft mode. There are two scenes I have to get through and complete. Afterward, I think I might have some more freedom to hit and run. By this, I mean start writing scenes out of order to better speed along the writing process. When I have used this in the past, eventually it has had the good effect of prompting me not to write several scenes I thought were necessary to the story but I reconsidered when I realized I was too bored to write them, then it would make sense those passages would be too boring to read. It also helps to keep the story moving along.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

BIG NEWS ALERT – My book The Yank Striker: A Footballer’s Beginning is now on Kindle! If you have a Kindle Unlimited subscription, you can just hoover that bad boy up into your library at no cost – otherwise, it’s just $4.95. Go to the link in this paragraph or in the link to my Amazon page on the front page or the My Works page here on Liegois Media to get to it. I’m super psyched.

There might be some more opportunities to see me out and about, perhaps later in the summer or beyond, but there is one event coming up very soon… I’ve already plugged it here on the past couple of newsletters, but if you’ll indulge me, I wanted to plug it just one more time.

I’ll be having my first “Meet the Author” event at 6:30 p.m. next Wednesday at Beaverdale Books, one of three Iowa bookstores where you can find The Yank Striker in stock. We’ll talk about the book and series, as well as writing in general.

Also, that same day I’ll be having my first ever radio interview with John Busbee and his show The Culture Buzz on KMFG 98.9. The interview should air the day of the event during his regular slot (11 a.m. – 1 p.m.). Hope you can give it a listen.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

Earlier this week I listed several different recommendations for stuff to read on Substack over in my Substack Notes feed. I try to list most of them there because otherwise it’s really going to clog up the newsletter. (Don’t even get me started at trying to keep up with my ever-churning Substack inbox.)

One thing I do want to was recommend

Brian Reindel 👾⚔️ as a pretty good writer who, like me, is trying to get things going here on this platform. I noticed this note he recently posted announcing a link group of fellow writers he created on his homepage. It’s a cool thing to see writers here trying to create their own communities and cooperative groups together.

Sadly, I have not yet had the chance to create or join such a group yet, although I certainly am open to it. If and when that happens, I will have to recreate the old Andre the Giant meme (“Andre the Giant has a Posse,” etc.).

Writing Advice for This Week

While I like to consider myself a relatively creative fiction writer, I have to say I don’t consider myself to be creative when giving writing advice. I’ve been thinking about why that’s the case, when I suddenly had the realization coming up with writing advice is a lot like trying to come up with creating your own teaching materials for a class, and that’s something I struggle with all the time. Take it from me when I say the type of creativity needed to write fiction and the type of creativity needed to write lesson plans are two totally different things. Just because you are good at one form of creativity does not mean you are as skilled or practiced at another.

So, while I do think there’s value in trying to offer a quick bit of advice on here, I believe I’m going to try and change tactics. Starting next week, I’m going to be taking a look at pieces of writing advice I’ve found in various places and evaluate them. As I mentioned during my last newsletter, I’m more of a mind of keeping to general, broad principles rather than a long checklist of rules. So, I’m going to take a look at some of these checklists and give you my opinions on them.

Writing Quote(s) of the Week

Let’s go for two this week. First, there’s Dorothy Parker admitting writing is work:

I hate writing, I love having written.

Dorothy Parker

And then, our old pal and writing icon Steve with the real reason for writing:

Writing isn’t about making money, getting famous, getting dates, getting laid, or making friends. In the end, it’s about enriching the lives of those who will read your work, and enriching your own life, as well. It’s about getting up, getting well, and getting over. Getting happy, okay? Getting happy.

Stephen King, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft

Final Thoughts

That’s it for this week. Again, check out this post regarding a new sale I’m having for paid subscriptions on this site. Also, check back here at noon Central Time tomorrow for my latest paid subscriber exclusive fiction, based on my most recent possible fiction project and series.

As always, check the links in the sidebar and on my author page if you’re looking to buy one of my books. If you buy one, I’d absolutely love it if you could leave a review on Amazon or wherever you get it, because that would be very helpful.

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A Week in the Writing Life, 15 July 2023: New stuff cooking

I’ve been writing a bit this past week, and a lot of it unexpected. We’ll get into it.

Home Front Stuff

Not too much at all to report here. I’ll be on the road with my wife to a wedding this weekend, so that’s a rare trip for us. She’s asked me to promise not to discuss soccer the entire trip up. Since the USMNT just lost to Panama this week, I think I can keep my pledge.

What I’ve Been Writing

With trying to keep up on the blog, getting things ready for the weekend (because I’ll be on the road for at least part of it), I haven’t had much time to get back to work on The Yank Striker 2. I have the feeling I will have to start not worrying about the boring scenes while writing the exciting ones, and that should help me get the story done faster than it has been.

Meanwhile, I’m cooking something else up, fiction-wise.

If you recall last week, I mentioned that while I have been trekking around different places in Iowa promoting my work, I got the idea for a possible book series centered around professional wrestling. Not only have I been sketching out some notes regarding this (yet to be officially named) series, but I’ve also started writing what could be a short prologue or short story set in the world this takes place in.

I started to get really in-depth with describing how this project came about and a few tiny hints about its plot for the newsletter today. However, the description began to get a bit oversized for just one subject.

So, since I wanted to talk up the project anyway, I decided to break off the whole discussion about it and the creative process I went through into a separate post. It’ll post here at noon tomorrow (Sunday) and will be a free read for everyone. I hope everyone enjoys it.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

I just wanted to thank the Slowdown Coffee Co. for being my host last Sunday as part of the Northside Market festival there in the Highland Park district of Des Moines. It was a great experience, a great coffee shop, and I would absolutely love to go back sometime.

I’ll be at the monthly meeting of the Iowa Writers’ Corner today. If you’re a writer who’s interested in being part of a writing community and learning from other writers, definitely come on down. We meet every third Saturday of the month at Felix and Oscars (F&O’s) at 4050 Merle Hay Road in Des Moines starting at 9 a.m. You can check us out on Facebook.

Oh, and there’s a tiny event I’d love to see you at.

I’ll be having my first “Meet the Author” event at 6:30 p.m. Wednesday, July 26, at Beaverdale Books, one of three Iowa bookstores where you can find The Yank Striker in stock. We’ll talk about the book and series, as well as writing in general.

Also, that same day I’ll be having my first ever radio interview with John Busbee and his show The Culture Buzz on KMFG 98.9. The interview should air the day of the event during his regular slot (11 a.m. – 1 p.m.). Heady stuff, for sure.

What I’ve Been Reading/General Recommendations

My inbox has been filling up with good stuff from Substack, but I’m going for a change of pace this week. I grew up with a guy at Muscatine High School named Juan Fourneau. While working in my hometown, he spent 20-plus years as a professional wrestler on the independent circuit. He’s written a memoir about those experiences and a whole mess of other subjects as well. I think he has a good eye for detail and description, among other things.

We were both recently featured in a new collection entitled Roads We’ve Taken: A Writer’s on the Avenue Anthology. He has a great essay in there about how watching the movie Rocky 4 inspired him as a kid, but you should also check out his web site (and his other writings) at https://www.latinthunder1.com/.

Writing Advice for This Week

In the piece I’m going to be running tomorrow about my new project, I talk about those who do a considerable amount of planning for their fiction projects and those who are “pantsers” (another word for flying by the seat of their pants). I come down more on the side of the former group than the latter, although I have seen the benefits of just writing whatever comes to mind and seeing where it takes you.

However, if you are writing anything bigger than, say a novella (which the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writer’s Association says should be around 17,500 and 40,000 words), I believe some amount of world-building is going to be required.

To elaborate, exactly what type of organization you choose to use for your project should be up to you. Whenever I’ve taught writing at the high school or junior college level, I’ve always considered this to be part of the prewriting portion of the writing process. I try to expose my students to a variety of prewriting techniques, but the choice of which ones they use to create material I leave in their hands. “Use whatever works for you,” is a frequent instruction of mine.

For example, with this new project I’ll talk about tomorrow, I had an idea of using either a timeline (a list of events in chronological order) covering the events of the story or a family tree (which shows the relationships between a family’s members). In this case, I settled on the family tree, since the entire plot was centered around one particular family. I sketched out the family tree using Microsoft OneNote (which I think I need to review at some point on the blog) where I laid out the family members, their names, and nicknames. I also added the dates of their births and (if applicable) their deaths, and the dates of their marriages. I eventually ended up adding more than 20 characters to the list, so it was a prewriting activity that paid off for me.

There’s times when I feel awkward when I’m giving writing advice. I believe the reason is because when it comes to the craft of writing, there are more general, broad principles to how it works rather than a long checklist of rules1.

For example, it made sense for me to make a family tree for the new project because the main character had a sizable family which were the main participants in the story line. However, in another story where there is a smaller family or a main character’s family is not as sizable, such a tree might not make sense. In fact, if my story involves a large number of events, a number of events that coincide with real-life events (as in historical fiction), or a long time period, a timeline may be a better way of sketching out where your story is going.

Thanks for coming to the lecture, everyone. Let me know if there are other writing issues you’d like to discuss in the comments.

Writing Quote of the Week

Since I eventually want to write a fantasy series, I thought a Brandon Sanderson quote might be good for this week. I also find it applies to my own philosophy toward my work as well.

By now, it is probably very late at night, and you have stayed up to read this book when you should have gone to sleep. If this is the case, then I commend you for falling into my trap. It is a writer’s greatest pleasure to hear that someone was kept up until the unholy hours of the morning reading one of his books. It goes back to authors being terrible people who delight in the suffering of others. Plus, we get a kickback from the caffeine industry…

Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians

Final Thoughts

And that’s another week in the books. Make sure to check out my Substack at noon Central time tomorrow for my extra post on my newest project – and it’ll be free, too.

As always, check the links in the sidebar and on my author page if you’re looking to buy one of my books. If you buy one, I’d absolutely love it if you could leave a review on Amazon or wherever you get it, because that would be very helpful.

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Footnotes:

  1. This idea of general writing principles might be worthy of its own post later on. I’ll keep it in mind. ↩︎