The Writing Life, 2 November 2024: Finally settling in to a new home

The last two months of 2024 are now upon Iowa. I’m looking forward to seeing what they bring.


The Home Front

As you can see from the cover photo, so to speak, my wife Laura and myself have finally set up shop in our new home in Fort Madison. It’s a two-story structure dating from the mid-20th century and has more than a few updated features. I think we’ll be happy here for a while to come.

There have been a few hiccups along the way with some quick renovations and a couple of calls to the repairman for the odd thing, but for the most part things are going well and there is plenty to work on and develop on the property for some time to come.

As for me, I seem to have found a fine writing location you can see above, tucked into a corner of the basement and a desk that was just sitting here, left behind. It might be the best quality desk I’ve yet owned. Whether I could ever transport it out of the basement is another issue, but no matter what, I’ll enjoy if for however long I have it. Regardless, this basement even has a door I can close, space for my books, plenty of lighting, a TV, bathroom with shower, work bench, and all the storage I could ask for. Hopefully I start getting productive and not just fuss around down here.

If I get bored I might do a blog specifically about my new writing space, so I’ll leave it there.

I think summer has finally, irrevocably left Iowa for 2024, so that’s nice.


What I’m Writing

My current progress on my ongoing projects:

  • The Yank Striker 2, the sequel for The Yank Striker: I’m proud to have rushed past the 59,000-word mark for the rough draft. I now have a clear idea of where I’m heading with the book and where it will wrap up, and I have a pretty good twist in mind for what is to come. Then I remind myself not to get to carried away with loving my own work, because this is, once again, a rough draft. Having a completed 75,000 word rough draft by 1 January 2025 seems to be increasingly viable.
  • The Untitled Pro Wrestling Family Drama project: I’ve just made some small progress with the rough draft, to be honest. Then again, this is the project I want to work on when I let The Yank Striker 2 rough draft sit for a while, so I want to have something to work on. I’m still past 24,000 words, which is not bad progress for something I’m not focusing my entire attention on.
    I might get into where the main character is starting the research into his own life. It’s going to be interesting to try and balance his existence as a writer with his dive into his family’s life of professional wrestling. I have a feeling the wrestling and the family drama is going to outweigh watching my main character in writer’s workshops and writing at home. 🙂
  • The Untitled Liegois Poetry Chapbook: So far, little recent progress on this. I think I want to get some feedback from my poetry friends about the layout of this chapbook and whether it makes sense to include all of these photos. We’ll see what they have to say.

What I’m Doing Having to Do With Writing

(AKA personal appearances)

I (also sometimes known as The Dude In Purple) have some events coming up this fall and some others I’m tentatively adding to the schedule. All these events will be me appearing live and with my books, The Holy Fool and The Yank Striker.

Here are my current events12:

  • I will also attend the Fort Madison Area Art Association’s Meet the Author Book Signing event from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, November 30, at the FMAAA’s center at 825 Avenue G, Fort Madison. This would be my first author’s event in my new home of Fort Madison, and I am overjoyed to be part of this gathering.
  • I’m hoping to be part of the DSM Book Festival at the at Franklin Junior High Event Center, 4801 Franklin Ave., Des Moines, Iowa, on Saturday, 22 March 2025. This is being sponsored by one of my favorite independent book stores in Des Moines, Beaverdale Books. I’ll provide more information, hopefully, as the event approaches.

I’ll be looking to add some more dates on the appearance calendar as time goes on. Hope to see you at one of those places.


Writing Quote of the Week:

Words of wisdom from Tim O’Brien, one of the authors I’ve really admired.

The thing about a story is that you dream it as you tell it, hoping that others might then dream along with you, and in this way memory and imagination and language combine to make spirits in the head. There is the illusion of aliveness.

  • Tim O’Brien, The Things They Carried

A Few Links About My Books and Where to Find Them

(Feel free to ignore this bit if you’ve read it before)

Currently, I have the mighty total of TWO novels which make up my official backlist4.

My first book is a journalism thriller set in Chicago during the turbulent days of the 2008 election and the start of the Great Recession. Check out more about it here.

You can get the paperback version of this book on Amazon here and the ebook version of it here.

A fellow Iowa writer and organizer of the Windsor Heights Book Fair, Tyler Granger, recently did a review of my book: you can find it here3.


My second book, the first in the The Yank Striker series, is a soccer drama telling the story of the beginning of a young American’s career as a player. There’s more about it here.

The paperback version of this book can be found on Amazon and the site of my publisher, Biblio Publishing. It is also available in ebook format on Amazon here.

John Buzbee of The Culture Buzz radio show in Des Moines (KFMG FM) interviewed me about the Yank Striker. You can catch it here.

For full links to these and other helpful places having to do with me and my writing, you can go to this page on my WordPress site, Liegois Media.


You can also get my books in person at these fine Iowa bookstores:

  • Burlington By The Book, 301 Jefferson St, Burlington.
  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave. # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella.
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

I’m always looking for some new places to place my books, so feel free to hit me up in the comments if you have a suggestion.


Another Way to Support Me (No Pressure… 😊)

If you are interested in supporting me but can’t quite afford a full subscription (although my paid subscription is just five dollars a month or an even better steal at thirty-five dollars a year), I have a new option for you4.

I am now on Venmo. If you are interested in a donation of whatever you can provide, you can just send whatever you can afford to there. You can choose to buy me a cup of coffee or whatever you can afford. Just click the button below or scan the QR code below to help out. Anything you can provide helps me keep things going.


Final Thoughts

Anyway, that’s pretty much how things have been for me regarding writing and a few other things. Hope you writers out there are being productive and creative and everyone out there is keeping safe.

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  1. Promotional image courtesy of the sponsoring organization. ↩︎
  2. Thanks to the Iowa City Book Festival for sponsoring me at their local author’s fair two weeks previously. It was a fantastic and well-planned event and I’m looking forward to coming back next year. ↩︎
  3. If anyone does any reviews of my work, I’d love to post some links to them. Send it to me in the DM’s or comments. ↩︎
  4. Unfortunately, I don’t think WordPress has a per-story payment plan. Shame, it would be useful if it did. ↩︎

The Writing Life, 15 June 2024: Settling into my new home

The Chicago River in Chicago, Ill., 1 June 2024. One last bit of travel for a while.

I’m glad I’m finally not writing this newsletter on the road or in the process of traveling somewhere for work, family, or otherwise. We’ll talk writing, home, and feeling like you have to accomplish something if you have ten or so weeks of official vacation. Let’s get into it.


The Home Front

I don’t mind traveling, but all of the commuting I’ve had to do for my past job and for my son while he was still trying to recover from his February accident. Now, he’s back at work and my daughter has graduated from University of Iowa and begun her new job with a top engineering firm in my hometown. As for me, I’m off work and without too much on my calendar until the end of this month (more on that in a second).

Now, I’m starting to feel more like a local resident in Fort Madison. I just voted in the primary, signed up for the YMCA, and trying to participate in some of the summer festivals and activities going on in the community.

There was one last bit of travel I undertook last weekend with my wife to Chicago which was the first experience I’ve had with the Amtrak train system. I enjoyed riding the rails, and would definitely recommend it to others.


What I’m Writing

With all of this traveling, I’ve fallen behind my goal of writing at least 200,000 words this year by at least a few thousand words off the pace. However, I’m hoping I spend the next several weeks of my vacation getting a boatload of writing done so by the time I start my new job in August.

So, what have I been writing? I’ve been planning out my next steps for The Yank Striker 2. As of right now, I have about 34,000 words for a rough draft, but I could easily trim 5,000 of those off the rough draft, because some of it on second glance will be honestly repetitive1. My plan is to end up with a rough draft of no more than 70-80,000 words, especially since the book will only cover less than a year of action and, if you couldn’t tell from the working title, is one in a series. The good thing about a series is, if you think a book is getting too long, you can always split it up into more than one books.

I’ve also been piecing together a rough draft of a fiction project I first came up with nearly a year ago now – a project having to do with a family of professional wrestlers. I even posted a short story which eventually became my initial stab at the project.

With our move early last year, I haven’t had much time to work on this project as I thought I had. However, with a bit of work, I’ve managed to put together more than 10,000 words for the project so far. As with The Yank Striker 2, since this will be the first book in a series (in this case, I’m thinking a trilogy), I don’t want it to be much longer than 80,000 words. I’m now at the point where I need to plot out the key scenes in this book to help better structure the rough draft2. I’ll let you know how it all is going further down the road.

Of course, I’ve been active here as well. I have (with only a couple of exceptions) posted regularly on weekends, usually Saturdays, with the odd bonus posts happening as well. They run as follows:

  • First and third weekends of the month – my normal The Writing Life newsletter, which you are reading now.
  • Second weekend of the month – Prose Night at the Writing Life, where I run original essays, short fiction, fiction excerpts, or (occasionally) longer-form advice about writing.
  • Fourth weekend of the month – Poetry Night at the Writing Life, where I post original poetry and (usually) a bit of background about the poems.
  • In the event of a fifth weekend of the month, I’ll either take a break or post some sort of bonus writing-themed material. For instance, since there is a fifth Saturday and Sunday this month, I might give a recap of how this writer’s conference I’m going to attend at the end of the month (read below about it).

What I’m Doing Having to do With Writing

Other than the typical blog maintenance stuff, I’ll be attending the Midwest Writing Center’s annual David R. Collins Writers’ Conference from 27 to 29 June next month. The MWC, based at the Rock Island (Ill.) Public Library, will be hosting the event at the campus of Augustana College in Rock Island. I’m looking forward to the fiction revision class and the poetry class for the event. This is especially true for the latter class, as I’ve not really had much of an opportunity to take any poetry workshops or classes up to this point. Until recent years, my focus has been almost entirely devoted to fiction.

As for anything else in this category, there’s not really much to report on upcoming, so I’ll hold off on talking about it for now.


Writing Quote(s) for the Week

For a change of pace, we’re going to include three writing quotes for the week. This one fits into why I’m so fascinated with building worlds in my fiction.

You are lucky to be one of those people who wishes to build sand castles with words, who is willing to create a place where your imagination can wander. We build this place with the sand of memories; these castles are our memories and inventiveness made tangible. So part of us believes that when the tide starts coming in, we won’t really have lost anything, because actually only a symbol of it was there in the sand. Another part of us thinks we’ll figure out a way to divert the ocean. This is what separates artists from ordinary people: the belief, deep in our hearts, that if we build our castles well enough, somehow the ocean won’t wash them away. I think this is a wonderful kind of person to be.

  • Anne Lamott, Bird by Bird

This next one fits in with how I feel compelled to write sometimes.

If I do not write to empty my mind, I go mad.

  • Lord George Gordon Byron

Finally… I used to have this book in my collection, but I doubt I still do. It was one of those books I felt an obligation to read rather than a desire to read and I reacted accordingly (I never finished the book, never getting into the main character or his motivations). However, this quote made me laugh and reminded me not to take myself as a writer too seriously.

I am at the moment writing a lengthy indictment against our century. When my brain begins to reel from my literary labors, I make an occasional cheese dip.

  • John Kennedy O’Toole, A Confederacy of Dunces

Writing Advice

For the first time in a while, I’ve run across some writing advice I don’t necessarily hold with, although I might have some qualified support for the idea. Here’s the advice:

In the planning stage of a book, don’t plan the ending. It has to be earned by all that will go before it.

Rose Tremain

I can see Tremain’s reasoning here, in that the ending has to be “earned” – which I interpret to be a logical and fitting ending based on the events leading to it. There has to be a cause to the effect.

However, I’m too much of a “plotter” not to have an idea of where the story will end up or resolve. I will not write out what the scene will look like until I am about to finish the rough draft, but I will know the basic beats of the scene well in advance.

“Idea” is the key word in the first sentence of the previous paragraph. Even though I may have an idea what the ending will look like, it could easily be tossed out or altered before I’m even done with the rough draft. It could very well be changed in the revising process. For me, however, just as a scientist needs to have a hypothesis before he can try his experiment which may or may not confirm said hypothesis, I think a writer should have an idea of an ending even if it is altered or discarded by the end of the writing process.

The one group of writers where I think this advice might fit are those “pantser” writers who start with a premise and a couple of characters and follow it wherever it might go. I talked about the differences between plotters and pantsers briefly in my last Prose Night post about my system of producing rough drafts.

TL;DR analysis – Not the best of advice for a writer like me, but it might suit others.


A Few Links About My Books and Where to Find Them, as Well as Something About This Site

My first book is a journalism thriller set in Chicago during the turbulent days of the 2008 election and the start of the Great Recession. Check out more about it here.

You can get the paperback version of this book on Amazon here and the ebook version of it here.

A fellow Iowa writer and organizer of the Windsor Heights Book Fair, Tyler Granger, recently did a review of my book: you can find it here.


My second book, the first in the The Yank Striker series, is a soccer drama telling the story of the beginning of a young American’s career as a player. There’s more about it here.

The paperback version of this book can be found on Amazon and the site of my publisher, Biblio Publishing. It is also available in ebook format on Amazon here.

For full links to these and other helpful places having to do with me and my writing, you can go to this page on my WordPress site, Liegois Media.

You can also get my books in person at these fine Iowa bookstores:

  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella.
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

I’m always looking for some new places to place my books (especially in eastern Iowa), so feel free to hit me up in the comments if anyone has a suggestion.


Let’s talk briefly about how The Writing Life works.

With a free subscription, you always will have access to my newsletters on the first and third weekends of the month, as well as selected articles up to a month after they’ve been published. However, if you have a paid subscription with me (which is pretty inexpensive), you will have access to all of my articles here, all of my archives, and my eternal gratitude. Plus, some first-dibs on possible future offers.


Final Thoughts

That’s all the writing news for this week. All you writers keep writing and everyone keep safe.

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  1. Fellow fiction writers, have you ever been in a situation where you’ve tried to start a scene, struggled to finish it, and as a result wound up with three separate scenes stuffed into one? That’s what I’m running into. Feel free to chat about it in the comments or by direct message. ↩︎
  2. This is not to say I’ve not done any world-building for the project – far from it. I’ve already put together a rough timeline of events for the full trilogy, a family tree for the main character’s family and the family tree of their chief rivals, as well as information on the fictional wrestling companies involved in the story. ↩︎

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The Writing Life, 16 December 2023: Thinking ahead

It’s that time again. Let’s talk about writing and some other stuff.

The Home Front

Well, it’s been a bit of a whirlwind week for me and my wife. If we’re counting the buildup to this decision, it’s actually been a whirlwind couple of months for us, to be honest.

Now that the big decision’s been made and the word is out, there’s plenty to get done in the months ahead. Laura’s plan is to move out to Fort Madison to begin her work. By then, we’re hoping to already have an apartment there; we’re actually apartment-hunting this weekend in Fort Madison.

We are hoping to get our Chariton house sold as soon as possible, but we might end up asking for whoever buys it to take possession of it in late May, perhaps. I am planning on finishing out the school year at my current district, so I will continue to work in the area at least until mid-May.

For now, we’ve been donating or getting rid of some items we know we’re not going to have use of anymore with considerable success. We may also include some items we’re not going to have immediate use of because we’re likely to be renting in Fort Madison for at least a year while we consider what’s out there.

Anyone interested in a cool little house in Chariton, Iowa, can email me at jasonliegois@liegois.media. Serious inquiries only, of course.

Although our son in Des Moines will be a little less than three hours away, most everyone in my immediate family will now be within about an hour drive, which will be a good thing. I’m looking forward to being part of a new community.

What I’m Writing

I’ve been writing more than I have been during the past month, but whether I have been writing things I should be writing is another issue lol.

Work on The Yank Striker 2 paused for a bit due to the general lull in my writing, but I honestly had some other things going on. I have restarted the project, but I have also been toying with an idea I’ve had since this year about a family of professional wrestlers and its history. As many writers will note, all of the shiny new ideas sometimes distract from the old ideas. George R.R. Martin is Exhibit A of this phenomenon.

I’ve started to piece together certain… scenes that could be part of a larger story, perhaps the genesis of what would be the first novel in this series I have in mind. I’ve also begun more research on the project to try and put together a story set in 20th century professional wrestling looking back at from the vantage of the 21st century.

I want to thank Deb West of the University of Iowa’s Program in Creative Writing, better known as the Iowa Writers’ Workshop. The main character in my prospective project is a member of the workshop, so I had questions about the program and how it works. I had the opportunity to speak with her for a time this week, and she was absolutely generous with her time and knowledge. I never had an opportunity to attend the program, but I am very proud the school I attended has such a fine program for developing writers.

I’ve been doing some thinking about how I’m going to be scheduling my regular posts here on Substack and WordPress, so I think I’ll talk about it below.

When I’m Writing

I think I’ve pretty much settled on the new schedule with which I’ll be publishing on Substack and my companion site on WordPress. So, I wanted to just let you know how it’s going to work.

Unless otherwise noted, I will be publishing my regular posts at 5 p.m. Central time on Saturdays. There may be some times when I have to delay or reschedule those, but I believe I can more or less stick to this schedule. It also doesn’t preclude me from making additional posts over the weekend or at other times if I get particularly productive or if I have something special to say.


The monthly schedule, thus, will look like this:

  • First Saturday of the month: The Writing Life newsletter.
  • Second Saturday of the month: Prose Night at the Writing Life. This will be original short fiction, essays, or excerpts from works in progress. I’ll try to surprise you. 🙂
  • Third Saturday of the month: The Writing Life newsletter1.
  • Fourth Saturday of the month: Poetry Night at the Writing Life. For these posts, I’ll be posting my original poetry past and present. Normally, I’ve been able to manage two poems a post, but some might be a single poem per week. I’ll try and keep toward more rather than less poems. I like a challenge.
  • In the event of a Fifth Saturday of the month: I might take the week off. Or not.

What I’m Doing Having to do With Writing

With this move, I’m likely going to have to have a change in who I hang out with writing-wise.

I will be three hours away from Des Moines, so attending some of the writing groups I have been meeting with for the past couple of years might not be as easy. At least some of them have online Zoom capabilities, so I do plan to join in that way.

Some of the other places where writers meet, like Iowa City and the Quad Cities, are “only” about two hours away. I might consider reconnecting with some of the groups I was attending when living in Muscatine, but I also know there might be some groups meeting perhaps in Burlington, as well.

The one thing I know for sure is that I don’t want to be without a writers’ group, whether I attend in person or virtually. I think I am very safe to say if I did not have the support of these groups during the past several years, I would not have published my first two books and may never have taken the step toward writing online. I think being in these groups gave me the networking and resources to hone my writing to a greater level than I have ever been in the past.

Writing Quote of the Week

My man Orwell with the basics.

A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?

George Orwell, Politics and the English Language

Where You Can Find My Books

For direct links to purchase my books in paperback and ebook form, including The Yank Striker: A Footballer’s Beginning and The Holy Fool, click on the links in the Substack sidebar or the links on my Substack author page. Or, you can go to this page on my WordPress site, Liegois Media.

You can also get them in person at these fine Iowa bookstores:

  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella.
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

All three are great independent bookstores who deserve your support. However, I’m always looking for some new places to place my books, so feel free to hit me up in the comments if anyone has a suggestion.

Final Thoughts

That’s about it for now. I’m hoping I can be more productive during the next few weeks of 2023. It’ll be poetry night next weekend, and I’m planning on cooking up some original work. See you then.

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  1. This might wind up being shorter than the newsletter on the first Saturday of the month since only two weeks will lapse between them rather than maybe three weeks. Or maybe not. At this point, your guess is as good as mine. ↩︎

A Week in the Writing Life, 28 October 2023: A short one this week lol

The feature photo is from Red Haw State Park outside Chariton, Iowa, taken this week. Here’s a few other pics from there:

Finally, it’s starting to feel and look like a proper fall season around here. And I was thinking I’d have to go through another weekend in the 70’s. Definitely not.

Anyway, this edition of the newsletter is going to be short because A., I had parent-teacher conferences three nights in a row this week, B., I was working on another book review to be featured here on this site (and others), and C., I realized around Friday night or so I hadn’t even started working on it until then. So, you’ll get what you get this weekend.

What I’ve Been Writing

Last week, I mentioned I was working on a couple of book reviews. The first one of these I am planning on releasing Sunday. The book review will be about Iowa author Tyler Granger and his debut book, Iowa Trouble. I’ve just gotten to know Tyler recently as we’ve run into each other at multiple book fair events around Iowa, and his debut intrigued me as I got to know more about it. I’m looking forward to sharing it with you, as well. Since book reviews are pretty common on the Internet, I’ll make that review available to everyone.

In case you are curious, my Goodreads profile page is here. Go ahead and visit it whenever you can.

Not too much progress on The Yank Striker 2 this week for all the aforementioned reasons, but I am hoping to get some more progress on it this weekend. I’ve also been doing some additional planning and sketching out for that project and the pro wrestling thing I’ve been toying around with. I’m considering doing some short stories connected to (and perhaps becoming part of) the larger series, and quite a few of those might be free posts as well. I’d like everyone to see what’s coming up and what they might want to try to read when it comes out.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

I’ve been considering getting a new logo/profile pic for the site. I’ve settled on a couple of pics I ran through some art processing apps that don’t suck. I was considering putting up a poll to see what you guys thought, but I’m leaning toward showing them to my daughter Maddie and see what she says. She’s usually got good judgement on those things and might be brighter than me when it comes down to it.

Writing Advice for the Week

This week, it’s time to talk about the last of George Orwell’s six rules of writing, which have been a fun activity for me over the past month or so.

Orwell is a literary hero of mine, who laid down this set of rules in an essay called “Politics and the English Language.” The entire essay is worth a read.

So, number six and the last on the list is:


Break any of these rules sooner than say anything barbarous.


A few months ago, I decided rather than trying to come up with my own bits of advice (which can be hard to do on a regular basis), I decided to take a look at other bits of writing advice on the Internet and elsewhere and comment on whether they made sense or not, which was an easier lift for me. The point I’ve been trying to make with these commentaries is other than some basic ideas like capitalizing the start of sentences and adding punctuation at the end of them, most writing “rules” should be considered guidelines, things considered but not always followed under every circumstance.

I’d long thought Orwell was of a similar mind as me, and this “rule,” in my opinion, proves it. This is his way of saying do what works and what is right in a given writing situation, and not be bound to do something because a style guide insists you do it in every circumstance. Consider the situation, consider the reader, and then make the best choice for the given moment.

Writing Quote(s) of the Week

It is nice to be creative without someone looking over my shoulder.

A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.

Roald Dahl

Not sure how having a Lego collection when I was a kid fits into this, but all right:

A writer – and, I believe, generally all persons – must think that whatever happens to him or her is a resource. All things have been given to us for a purpose, and an artist must feel this more intensely. All that happens to us, including our humiliations, our misfortunes, our embarrassments, all is given to us as raw material, as clay, so that we may shape our art.

Jorge Luis Borges, Twenty-Four Conversations with Borges: Interviews by Roberto Alifano 1981-1983

Where I’ll Be and Where You Can Find my Books

Currently, I have one book event on my calendar. From 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, Nov. 4, I will be at the Elwell Building at the Iowa State Fairgrounds as part of the 8th Annual Indie Author Book Expo. If something else comes up, I’ll let you know.


I’ve got links to my books in paperback and ebook format in the sidebar here, but you can get them in person at these fine Iowa bookstores:

  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

All three are great independent bookstores who deserve your support.

Final Thoughts

Hope everyone has a great weekend, and keep an eye out for the book review I talked about up top. Take care, everyone.

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A Week in the Writing Life, 21 October 2023: Slow writing… but still progress?A Week in the Writing Life, 21 October 2023:

We’re deep into October, or as I like to call it, one of only two months out of the year Iowa has near perfect weather. How about we talk writing and other stuff?

What I’ve Been Writing

I’m very deep into putting together The Yank Striker 2 (working title), and that’s been pretty much all I’ve been writing this week other than this site. I feel like I’ve been making good progress on the big section I’ve been on and I’m in the process of finalizing what the bare bones structure of the book should be.

I’ve probably mentioned it before in this space, but my way of planning out the plot of my books is to string together what I call essential scenes. These are the scenes I absolutely have to have in the book to tell the story I want. Usually, I take a look at these scenes or notes on these scenes throughout the writing process and ask myself “are all of these scenes absolutely necessary?” As I am often writing these scenes not in chronological order, but in order of importance, this doesn’t result necessarily in me cutting scenes after I write them1.

It also helps streamline the revision process, for sure. I still remember having to cut down my first 150,000-word rough draft of The Holy Fool down to under 100,000, and it was a tough lift. When I used this process for The Yank Striker, it really cut down on the extraneous scenes and material in my work.

One of the paradoxes I’m running into, however, is this: the more I concentrate on the project, the slower the writing is coming for me. I continue to write on a daily basis, but my word count is not as high as it has been in previous days when I was writing more than just a couple projects.

In discussing the situation with my Des Moines writing group (the Iowa Writers’ Corner), they brought up the idea I have to spend time putting greater thought into how the story is going to go and proceed. Just because the words are not filling the paper or electronic page doesn’t mean I’m not participating in the writing process.

I would have to agree with this, now I’ve had a chance to consider this idea. It’s like I know all of the battles that are to come in a military campaign, but I haven’t exactly worked out how those battles are going to be fought. I’ve always worked on improving my word count to ensure I remain a productive writer and not just sitting around and claiming to be a writer. However, I need to keep in mind word count is not the only measure of productivity.

What I’ve Been Doing Having to do With Writing

I’m in the middle of reading projects for at least three people currently. Two of these I’m planning on doing book reviews for, and the other will be beta reader feedback.

Even being a fast reader like myself, this can be a long process even not taking the time of writing the reviews into account. However, I don’t want to let these projects sit on the back burners for too long.

As for the book reviews, I’m planning on posting those on Goodreads. My profile page is here for those curious, but I will also post those reviews here for you to read as well. I’m looking forward to you hearing about those projects, so stay tuned in a week or so.

Writing Advice for the Week

This week, it’s time to talk about the fifth of George Orwell’s six rules of writing. Orwell, the author of 1984 and Animal Farm, is a longtime idol for me. During the past several weeks, I’ve been reviewing this well-known set of rules he laid down in an essay called “Politics and the English Language.” The entire essay is worth a read.

So, number five on the list is:


Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.

Orwell did title his essay “Politics and the English Language,” but this can obviously be applied to whatever language you happen to be writing in2. Since you have to assume in most circumstances you are writing for a general audience, why use words you have to take time to explain to them? Especially if using such a term isn’t necessary for the task at hand, whether fiction or nonfiction.

As always, there are exceptions to this rule. One example I recently faced in a short story I posted to the site was when I used the term “kayfabe.” Unless you happen to be a professional wrestling fan, you are likely not familiar with this term. However, I used it in the story because I wanted to take time to explain the concept to the audience through a conversation my main character had. I wanted to do this so the audience understood the term and had an appreciation for how important the concept was in pro wrestling. As with Orwell’s and all writing rules, there are always exceptions.

Writing Quote(s) of the Week

Unlike George R.R. Martin, I’d have to say I’m more of an architect. In my opinion, the best writing techniques are whatever ones get results.

I think there are two types of writers, the architects and the gardeners. The architects plan everything ahead of time, like an architect building a house. They know how many rooms are going to be in the house, what kind of roof they’re going to have, where the wires are going to run, what kind of plumbing there’s going to be. They have the whole thing designed and blueprinted out before they even nail the first board up. The gardeners dig a hole, drop in a seed and water it. They kind of know what seed it is, they know if planted a fantasy seed or mystery seed or whatever. But as the plant comes up and they water it, they don’t know how many branches it’s going to have, they find out as it grows. And I’m much more a gardener than an architect.

George R.R. Martin

Where I’ll Be and Where You Can Find my Books

Currently, I have one book event on my calendar. From 10 a.m. to 5 p.m. Saturday, Nov. 4, I will be at the Elwell Building at the Iowa State Fairgrounds as part of the 8th Annual Indie Author Book Expo. If something else comes up, I’ll let you know.


I’ve got links to my books in paperback and ebook format in the sidebar here, but you can get them in person at these fine Iowa bookstores:

  • Beaverdale Books, 2629 Beaver Ave # S1, Des Moines
  • Pella Books, 824 Franklin St, Pella
  • The Book Vault, 105 S Market St, Oskaloosa.

All three are great independent bookstores who deserve your support.

Final Thoughts

Well, I’m spending the rest of the day with my wife watching the Iowa Hawkeyes play football. Hope the week to come goes well for you all.

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