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In looking at last week’s numbers, you can tell that I’m getting deep into the revision game.
+1,303 words written.
Days writing: 2 out of 7.
Days revising: 6 out of 7 for [EDIT] 510 total minutes.
Daily Writing Goals Met (500+ words or 30 minutes of revisions): 7 out of 7 days.
I’d have to look, but this might be the best week I’ve recorded regarding revisions, and I’m nowhere near done. It’s definitely the first time in a long time that I met my DWGM every day of the week.
The thing that kicked off this spurt of activity was the feedback I’d gotten from one of my beta readers I really respect. That and some of the other comments I’ve received made it very clear where I should be going with this revision on The American Nine.
The good thing is that to give my character more of a struggle along this path, I’m not going to have to add any additional material. (Version 3.0 of the manuscript is hovering at around 93,000 words – I’ve said before about how I want to keep my finished manuscripts at a maximum of 95,000-100,000 words, preferably on the lower end of that scale). It’s just going to be a matter of me rewriting scenes to show more uncertainty and struggle. I realized that while I wanted to create an idea of the American Messi or Maradona with this character, the character is 17 at the start of the book and like Messi and Maradona, they had to work and rise to the top to get where they were. I have to show that process in this book.
Two random notes to close things out:
Anyway, more later.
Yeah, so the numbers for this week… not really impressive, but not a disaster:
+1,206 words written.
Days writing: 4 out of 7.
Days revising: 3 out of 7 for 90 total minutes.
Daily Writing Goals Met (500+ words or 30 minutes of revisions): 3 out of 7 days.
So, not matching last week’s totals, but not a total collapse. Explanations? Two in particular come to mind.
First, since we are now in mid-July, I have to say that I am officially in the doldrums of my summer vacation where maximum complacency sets in. Luckily, this has not been as severe as previous years. Due to various circumstances, I find myself keeping active with local political volunteerism and assisting my wife with various errands. As a result, I am more occupied than last year, when I literally had nothing to do during the summer after a few consecutive years of taking and/or teaching classes during that time (to be fair, I probably needed the break).
Second, of course, was the conclusion of the World Cup yesterday and this past week. As has been documented previously on this blog, I have a pretty serious soccer obsession at this point. General thoughts (Random Notes? Random Notes!) on the tournament:
How much of a soccer/football junkie am I? I’m actually counting down to the ICC club exhibition tournament in America within a couple of weeks. Plus there’s still Major League Soccer in America, and the European leagues will start up in a month… the fact that there’s always soccer on somewhere in the world is good for me, but it can be annoying to those close to me. 🙂
Well, hadn’t expected to write that much about soccer, but there hasn’t been too much writing items to talk about.
I will say this, however, as a small piece of writing advice. If you are writing a story and you are not feeling it, you may want to swap out your characters for new ones that attract your interest. Not to get into too many details at this very early stage of the creative process, but I started considering putting a main character from one of my current projects into a writing project that had a totally different genre. And I think it’s going to work. It might be a project that I wasn’t planning on writing for a while, but I think it has made it a far more interesting and not quite as cliched as I had initially feared. Mixing and matching – it worked for rap, and it will work for you, too.
That’s about all for now. I do plan to write up something for midweek – I know I didn’t do that last week as I have been trying to do. Anyway, I’ll get you more stuff later.
Well, this turned out pretty weird:
+3,913 words written.
Days writing: 4 out of 7.
Days revising: 1 out of 7 for 30 total minutes.
Daily Writing Goals Met (500+ words or 30 minutes of revisions): 4 out of 7 days.
Not expecting quite those numbers this week. Let me explain.
This week, I had planned to do a little bit of writing on my next project and perhaps a little light editing on The American Nine. What actually wound up happening is that I posted two blogs within a week, one my first photo entry and another about one of my older poems.
Then I wound taking a look at an abandoned short story from years back which combined two of my obsessions, alternative history and late 20th century professional wrestling. What I ended up writing after two feverish days was a 4,000 word-plus short story speculating how the avoidance of a premature death could have changed the course of professional wrestling history. The operatic psychological storytelling behind professional wrestling has always fascinated me when it’s done right, and the action is over the top. The whole story I’ve written is probably ridiculous but I’ll post it later today – watch out for it.
Random Notes:
That’s all I can think of for now. Watch for more later.
If you were waiting for me to make a post today, sorry I didn’t get to it until now. It’s interesting that I now have around 70 people following me on WordPress at this moment. (I have around 300 each for my Facebook and Twitter pages dedicated to writing.)
The numbers:
+1,556 words written.
Days writing: 2 out of 7.
Days revising: 2 out of 7 for 90 total minutes.
Daily Writing Goals Met (500+ words or 30 minutes of revisions): 4 out of 7 days.
So, pretty much holding somewhat steady for the week, down in revising days and DWGM, but up a little in writing.
Not much to talk about this week, so I’ll go over a few things (RANDOM NOTES) and leave it at that.
That’s it for now; more later.
With me now on full vacation and some ideas shaking loose from old projects, I think that it was reflected in my activity this week.
+1,354 words written.
Days writing: 3 out of 7.
Days revising: 4 out of 7 for 300 total minutes.
Daily Writing Goals Met (500+ words or 30 minutes of revisions): 5 out of 7 days.
Not a lot of original writing, of course, but I am keeping active. I’m going to keep the journal update brief this week, both due to the level of new info I have to share (not much) and the desire not to repeat myself (which is strong).
Just a few Random Notes:
I’ll write some more when I have some more to write.
So… I was kind of lazing around for the past few weeks, but things… sort of picked up this week?
+502 words written.
Days writing: 1 out of 7.
Days revising: 2 out of 7 for 180 total minutes.
Daily Writing Goal Met (500+ words or 30 minutes of revisions): 3 out of 7 days.
So, there’s that. Less writing, but more revising. So, I want to talk about where I am at with the three writing projects I’m actively working on, then get into some RANDOM NOTES. 🙂
That’s it for the projects; now, it’s time for Random Notes:
More later.
Well, here’s what happened last week in the official extension of my “vacation” :
+1,572 words written.
Days writing: 2 out of 7.
Days revising: 0 out of 7 for 0 total minutes.
Daily Writing Goals Met (500+ words or 30 minutes of revisions): 2 out of 7 days.

[Pictured: What I’m not doing.]
These, I believe, are the factors behind the pause:
So, that’s what I have faced, but I think that this week I will start to turn that around.
Quick Random Notes:
That’s it for now; more later.
Well, the title says it all, doesn’t it? So do the numbers:
+352 words written (Blog).
Days writing: 1 out of 7.
Days revising: 2 out of 7 for 60 total minutes.
Daily Writing Goals Met (500+ words or 30 minutes of revisions): 2 out of 7 days.
Yep.
So, what’s behind the break?
Part of it was my personal situation. Actually, I got into that a bit last time, so I didn’t want to just repeat myself too much here. What I will say is that I’m trying to gee myself up, as they would say in the British Isles, and getting myself ready for what is coming next. That includes:
OK, Random Notes:
I was listening to this song by Townes Van Zandt while writing this, so you might as well hear it, too.

That’s it for now; more later.