Writing Journal 1.8.2018/Random Notes: Slow start to the new year

Well, starting out the new year 2018 didn’t really get off to a good start. I was writing, but not on a consistent basis.

Enough intro, here’s the totals from the past week:

+2,091 words written.

Days writing: 4 out of 7.

Daily writing goals met (500+ words): 3 out of 7 days.

Notes about the count:

  • I have the feeling that it is going to get tougher and tougher to reach my daily and weekly quotas the closer I get to writing the end of the book. These are the main tasks I have to accomplish. Without getting too much into spoilers, they are:
  1. Getting through a pretty harrowing scene where my main character is essentially threatened with assault and has to do something that is distasteful to escape the situation. Despite the subject matter, I believe it’s essential to show how he decides to make a final decision about what he wants to do with his life.
  2. Writing an entirely new scene that looks like just another football game he has to play but is actually step one in his plan to change around his life.
  3. Rewriting two critical scenes to make them better reflect some of the mid-draft changes I decided to make.
  4. See if I have any room for additional scenes that might add to the story. I’m sticking to the 99,999-word count limit. If I want to write more, there’s always sequels.
  • I am thinking that I will consider setting up a goal for revising and editing work. If all goes well, I plan to be revising quite a bit beginning this spring. Even though I didn’t succeed in keeping at my quota for the last six months, it did give me valuable focus and complete a lot more writing, on a more consistent basis, than I ever had. I feel it is just as important to have a goal for that as much as for the drafting (the word count).

 

Now, the actual Random Notes:

  1. Getting behind in looking for reading material to post on the Facebook and Twitter pages for my reading list. I’ll get some work in tonight on that.
  2. I do plan to write tonight. Honest.
  3. Old procrastination – hours and hours of video games. New procrastination – hours on hours of YouTube reaction videos. (Hence this coming out tonight rather than yesterday.)
  4. There’s a workshop on publishing books at the Midwest Writer’s Center in Davenport. It looks cool, but it is a big time commitment and dollar commitment, so I might have to beg off.
  5. New Year’s just trucking along.
  6. I have material for at least two or three other posts. Now I just have to see if I have the discipline to get them done.

More later.

Writing Journal/Random Notes 12.31.2017: Not as much as I’d hoped, but that’s on me

Considering that I had the whole week off, I was disappointed with my output this time. The only upside is that I improved on my totals from last week.

Those totals:

+2,975 words written.

Days writing: 5 out of 7.

Daily writing goals met (500+ words): 5 out of 7 days.

And the full totals:

Length of first draft (as of today’s date): 83,095 words.

Current goal for length of first draft by the end of Dec. 31, 2017: 83,000-85,000 words.

Planned length of first draft: 95,000-99,999 words.

So, Random Thoughts (most tied to the totals):

  1. Sorry this came out late today, but I had a shopping run out of town with my son and some other family time for the New Year. Thankfully, I am not out at a party tonight, and with Kathy Griffin fired from CNN there’s not too much point in watching the festivities on TV. So, writing time tonight.
  2. I keep saying I’m going to put together some more query letters for The Holy Fool, but I haven’t gotten around to it. That needs to get going again and in earnest.
  3. If I do have a resolution for 2018, it probably will be for my book to be published, even if it’s on Amazon or whatever. I’ve developed this online presence; it’s about time I used it to spread my writings around.
  4. Either tonight or tomorrow, I’m going to get online and read some more of my fellow bloggers here on WordPress. Thanks to everyone who has followed my page here or me on Facebook or Twitter.
  5. I’ve hit the lower end of my current goal for the overall book for the end of  2017. I’m over 83,000, but I want to see if I can get ambitious and get anywhere near 85,000. It will be fun to see if I can do it.
  6. Tomorrow, I plan to do another post detailing what happened with my writing during the last half of 2017. That will be very interesting to see once I crunch those numbers.
  7. Also want to do (if only, if only) two other posts this week – a long in the works thought piece and possibly one of my poems/essays.
  8. It was a wild year. I’m glad I started this blog mid-year and am looking forward to celebrating its first anniversary in the next several months.

Happy 2018.

Writing Journal/Random Notes 12.17.2017: At least I can analyze my writing failures better

Well, this week’s writing session turned into what, for me, was a bomb. And I was at the end of the week, just staring at the screen, watching the time go by, like (inserting The Last Jedi-appropriate reaction picture here):

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The stats:

+1,801 words written.

Days writing: 5 out of 7.

Daily writing goals met (500+ words): 1 out of 7 days.

Well, I always say it could be worse – I could have gone three years without writing like I did back home years ago.

Some background: I am currently working on a book with the working title The American 9. My intention is for this book, a sort-of coming of age/rise of a sports idol story that finally harvests my obsession with soccer into something of use. I’ve talked about it before.

Based on past research, I should be shooting for a book somewhere in the 80,000-100,000 word range. This is where I stand on the first draft today (I’ve not posted these numbers before):

Current length of first draft: 77,657 (as of the beginning of today).

Current goal for first draft length by Dec. 31, 2017: 85,000-90,000.

[At this rate, that goal might be ambitious. But if I have two good last writing weeks of the year, 85K is doable.]

Planned length of first draft: 95,000-99,999.

[Not so much this week, but it’s a good title for a regular feature so I don’t want to junk it] Random Notes:

  1. As the title implies, I do have what I consider to be a good idea for why I boinked out so harshly on the writing output. Since I rededicated myself to a writing lifestyle, those valleys of not writing have been fewer and far between.
    In putting together this novel, I’m trying something I have not previously done. Instead of writing the book how it will be read – that is, from beginning to end – I am assembling the book like a mechanic. I am installing all of the vital, most interesting scenes first, and then considering whether I need to add in the other scenes later.
    This week, I came across a scene that I considered to be vital – the last soccer game D., my main character, has with his old Sunday League team, after he has gone off the college and the other main members of the team have drifted off into other interests. I believed it was a vital scene, because it helps him begin to reexamine whether he made the right choice to play college football near his hometown rather than go to England and try to succeed as a soccer player there.
    The only problem is that writing the scene became a slog. It just didn’t feel like the action was flowing, although I did not include the entire scene, but rather only the times when D. scored goals for his team.
    What I needed to remember is that if I feel like I’m writing garbage, especially in the first draft, I just need to type the garbage and move on. Everything gets fixed in the revisions. I forgot to do that this week, and the above is the result.
  2. In case anyone’s interested, my leg that I talked about hurting last week is slowly improving. I can now walk normally, but climbing stairs is still problematic. Thankfully, it’s a non-issue where writing is concerned.
  3. My winter break starts Thursday evening. I honestly could care less about any presents, but I am looking forward to ending 2017 on a good writing tear. More and more I am finding myself in front of a computer writing than anything else.
  4. This will be the only post here today, but I am working on another blog post that might come out midweek if I get ambitious [ha-ha].

That’s it. Going to schedule some posts for the upcoming week and getting a better writing day in so I can get out of that scene…

Writing Journal/Random Notes 12.10.2017: I made my quota, at least?

It sort of feels like a lost weekend for me – I sort of bugged out a little, but it was a good weekend. Luckily, thanks to a decent writing weekend (remember when I said I shouldn’t depend on those, ha ha), I managed to make my quota. As always, the totals:

+3,561 words written.

Days writing: 6 out of 7.

Daily writing goals met (500+ words): 4 out of 7 days.

Well, there’s some weeks that I would have died for this type of writing week – the ones where I didn’t meet my quota, that is. 🙂

Now for the Random Notes:

  1. I do appreciate the writing groups on Facebook that straight up allow you to promo your sites and exchange likes and subscriptions with each other. If you are one of those guys that ran across me on one of those pages, I’m glad to see you and let me know what you thought of the site.
  2. The more I looked at those sites, the more I got envious of the authors that have actual products (i.e., books) to hawk on their sites. I never was a fan of New Year’s resolutions, but I want to make one now. I want to have something set up by next year to be selling one of my books – likely The Holy Fool – in some format so that people can read it and I can get some actual cash from it. I don’t care whether it would be an e-book or whatever. That is a goal I plan to meet.
  3.  I liked posting one of my writings on the page last week. I’m going to try to make that more of a thing. I never considered myself much of a poet, but I might post some of my feeble attempts at the art form here, as well as some other random writings and essays as well. Especially stuff I don’t think I could ever monetize. 🙂
  4. Hit the 75,000-word mark on my current project, The American Nine. Good times. As I think I mentioned, I am shooting for a book of just under 100,000 words (which I think is my new hard limit for the books I am writing). I was hoping to have a little less than 90,000 words by the end of the year. With being in mid-December, I am now at over 77,000 words. I think my plan is doable.

That’s it for now; more later.

Writing Journal/Random Notes 12.2.2017: Below quota again, but not horrific

All right, so I put out this post late tonight, but hopefully anyone watching what I do was interested (I think?)

I’ll post the week’s stats below, but I think yo can guess from the title what you will see:

+2,693 words written.

Days writing: 4 out of 7.

Daily writing goals met (500+ words): 4 out of 7 days.

And what can I learn from all of this, kids?

Consistency is my friend; hoping for a “big weekend” to make up words isn’t usually effective. It just puts too much pressure on me to come up with something interesting.

On a somewhat unrelated tangent, I need to try and write these blog posts and get them done on Saturday and have them ready. Procrastination is not my friend.

Also, if you didn’t see it, I put out something of my own writing here earlier today. I felt compelled to write it after a soccer game I attended a few years ago, and used it as a “sample essay” for some of the college composition classes I taught. I just felt like sharing it to anyone that might be interested.

More later.